In Love

Re-edit...Re-Titled

With you, I am invincible, knowledgeable gracious endearing indestructible .

Without you I'm vulnerable indecisive misplaced in a labyrinth of tedious deception.

With you, I have the courage of a hundred men courageous virtuous heroic victorious.

Without you, I cower in the shadows of a tumultuous hell, bending twisting whirling in a pool of despair.

With you, life is worth every precious breath, every waking moment impervious to failure.

Without you life truly does not exist! Emptiness reigns,

overwhelming me to the point of despondency .

With you, every spectrum of passionate being revolves solely around you.

Without you, gray hues bleed irrational musings of an inconsolable loss.

Reviews

[Sara Mercury]

How can anyone be so in love? It's only something I can dream about. You must have true love in your life to be able to write this, or else you have the rare talent of being able to pluck your inspiration from thin air. :)

[Thecreekdontrise]

Love it.
and the picture is dead on

(: thank you, Seriously

[china]

This is so beautiful, I can really feel the love through your words.

[Wildfleour]

What a romantic.........doesn't everyone want to be loved like this?

[natalie]

i really like your poem!!!!

[Seashell]

Very romantic and strong expressive declarations.
You have a great talent. Keep up the good work.
I like this very much.
Thanks for share.

Babsie Bee xx

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

A wonderful poem which is both inspiring and very emotional,the depth runs deeper than a mountain stream.There are some of us who are almost without exception just meant to dwell on earth for a short time and those who can leave an impression on us forever whoever short that time is that we are with them.
ps sorry about the line divisions on my poem it's just for printing purposes for my records.

[I Am Svetlana]

I really like your words here and I could feel how true they were as I read them. Beautiful piece!

[Brianna Brie]

With you, I have the courage of a hundred
men, without you I cower in the shadows
of a nightmarish hell.

Very nice write! It is wonderful to be influenced in such a good way. Well done.

[Emily B]

love is beautiful, ain't it?