In Love

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With you, I am invincible, knowledgeable gracious endearing indestructible .

Without you I'm vulnerable indecisive misplaced in a labyrinth of tedious deception.

With you, I have the courage of a hundred men courageous virtuous heroic victorious.

Without you, I cower in the shadows of a tumultuous hell, bending twisting whirling in a pool of despair.

With you, life is worth every precious breath, every waking moment impervious to failure.

Without you life truly does not exist! Emptiness reigns,

overwhelming me to the point of despondency .

With you, every spectrum of passionate being revolves solely around you.

Without you, gray hues bleed irrational musings of an inconsolable loss.

Reviews

[just is]

This is awesome,

Without you life truly does not exist! Emptiness reigns, overwhelming me to the point of despondency

love these lines here.

[Jester]

The give and take of Love.

It's is nearly deadly.

Great write, and great capture of the feelings. I really love this!

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you Jester, much appreciated... :)

[Lyn Croker Paget]

I couldn't find any where else to comment but I enjoyed your music clip. You are really excellent with that guitar. Well done

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you kindly Lyn :)

[Jamestown]

Very well put, sincere and romantic, nice piece.

[Jenny Kort]

Its a very romantic piece of writing I enjoyed reading it

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you Jenny, much appreciated...

[Jenny Kort]

You are Welcome

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Joe, another awesome write, I loved the romance, the need for that person!

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you Ms. Kathy :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

My pleasure Mr. Joe:)

[Sukriti Suki]

this is wonderful...with you, without you...a treat for a romantic...wonderful.

[My Fair Lady]

I love the contrast you have described, how the addition of love lightens the "grey hues" of life.. and adds "spectrum of passionate being" .. Really good.

[Ladysue]

love the image as I do this piece...love has that funny way of making everything look ever brighter. its magical and makes everything alive...beautifully romantic and so moving...

[Audrey Howitt]

A great pairing between the verse and the picture. Your loves shines out strongly from the words and feel of your poem. Thanks!!