Anticipate
A Poem by
Dream Weaver
Each day grows
darker much shorter in time, every waking moment is an argumentative rhyme.
Is there nothing to look forward to,
nowhere to go, stagnant and oblivious it’s a stoic sideshow.
Void of direction how could one learn, imagining one day that morality will
return.
All is not lost at least that’s what
you’ve heard,
unscrupulous matters teetering on the absurd.
No zest no passion, no desire to be, no love of life in all of its
mediocrity.
You think… you think… You wait
and you wait, for all of life’s bullshit you must anticipate!
© 2013 Dream Weaver
Author's Note
Reviews
philosophical and poetic , a poem to ponder .
"theater of absurb " sounds like an album title to me , Camus writing the lyrics .
and that ending - I feel a touch of the careful of what you wish -or anticipate- for
Posted 13 Years Ago
yes, words that i could not express in time when i felt this way but did not know it. as you said "Void of direction in circles you turn,
no inspiration just crash and burn."
its a horrible state to be in. during those times, even without inspiration, i just have channel my anger/sadness into music and poetry. otherwise you do spiral and burn, cause there is way too much bullshit in life to try and hold in all in. thanks for posting. i agree, it does make you think.
Posted 14 Years Ago
yes, words that i could not express in time when i felt this way but did not know it. as you said "Void of direction in circles you turn,
no inspiration just crash and burn."
its a horrible state to be in. during those times, even without inspiration, i just have channel my anger/sadness into music and poetry. otherwise you do spiral and burn, cause there is way too much bullshit in life to try and hold in all in. thanks for posting. i agree, it does make you think.
That was thought provoking, I am sure I'll be pondering this one for some time. Wow.
Posted 14 Years Ago
That was thought provoking, I am sure I'll be pondering this one for some time. Wow.
Now this I liked! It held loads of meaning.. The darkness, moments in time where you toss and turn. Nothing makes sense. Oh yea.. These I can relate to. And the ending 3 lines, hell.. Bravo!
Mags xx
Posted 14 Years Ago
Now this I liked! It held loads of meaning.. The darkness, moments in time where you toss and turn. Nothing makes sense. Oh yea.. These I can relate to. And the ending 3 lines, hell.. Bravo!
Mags xx
Well done, speaking to those dark, dark times in life, and the picture of the scull in war gives it other dimensions too.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Well done, speaking to those dark, dark times in life, and the picture of the scull in war gives it other dimensions too.
oh you fooled me with the title~ where one thinks the lines will go~ well~they twist around like a noose~ well done crafting~
Posted 14 Years Ago
oh you fooled me with the title~ where one thinks the lines will go~ well~they twist around like a noose~ well done crafting~
I think this is one of my fav's of your's:)
Depressive and realistic view! Hard to see past those dusty books at times love! Great poem
xx
Posted 14 Years Ago
I think this is one of my fav's of your's:)
Depressive and realistic view! Hard to see past those dusty books at times love! Great poem
xx
This poem reminds me of depression, dread, gaining nothing
in the end.
Posted 14 Years Ago
This poem reminds me of depression, dread, gaining nothing
in the end.
All of this is spot on, especially the ending line. I loved it.
Posted 14 Years Ago
All of this is spot on, especially the ending line. I loved it.
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