I had to redo it all because of typos that were pointed out to me...I even changed a few lines here .. read moreI had to redo it all because of typos that were pointed out to me...I even changed a few lines here and there :) I see you noticed lol ;)
write it out...that is what we do...we poets are bonded by this emotion...love and loss...this is beautifully worded...i think you meant "I breathe in your trust"
but that stanza is delicious.
jacob
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you Jacob, it was a typo and too late to correct, then I forgot
about it..I appreciate y.. read moreThank you Jacob, it was a typo and too late to correct, then I forgot
about it..I appreciate your review and the heads up.
Love the style of this one! The title is so very Tattoye!! Only if everyone thought or shared empathy like you for broken hearts the world would be a bed of roses! Great one Joe :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you Prathama, such kind words, I hope I can live
up to the billing.. Again thank you. :)
11 Years Ago
Always a pleasure and the words are least I could say :)
You are certainly not alone, love the format, love the hopefulness that it suggests. This is one of my favorite of yours, very nicely pen'd Joe. Kudos.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you Frieda, it's nice to know that some women get me...
You're a gem and as always thank.. read moreThank you Frieda, it's nice to know that some women get me...
You're a gem and as always thanks for the kind review...
11 Years Ago
Don't be starting that rumor, you'll ruin my reputation! lol...I'll never understand you guys, just .. read moreDon't be starting that rumor, you'll ruin my reputation! lol...I'll never understand you guys, just adore your poetry, just saying. ;-)