Odessey

I’m caught in the middle, it’s the beginning of the end, yes time is irrelevant I just watch it transcend.   The mind plays tricks on reclusive behavior, letting lunacy propel and emerges as your savior.   Every sound is amplified, every thought misidentified. Neurosis is a dish best served cold, a tumultuous odyssey, exclusively told.   Vision it as an epos for the Mephistopheles kind, your life a fragmented psychosis, undetermined and undermined.   Scorned and defeated nothing left to defend, negating memories on which you depend. Voices carry through steadfast walls, stygian reflections dispersing down hallowed halls.   So this is it separating body from soul, defected and scarred omitting the whole.    © 1/7/13 Joe Reyes

Reviews

[Maya Luna]

How you shattered the whole into fragments from the inside out to end the thought process is brilliant. Your writing is amazing!

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you for your kind review Maya, it is greatly appreciated...

[Maya Luna]

You're welcome.

[Geon Quuin]

Somewhat disturbing. Not really. It has a good flow to it. Although I had a problem understanding one word: Mephistopheles. What is this, exactly? Anyways, overall, it's a good write.

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you kindly, much appreciated as well.."Mephistopheles" is in the dictionary as: is a demon featured in German folklore. He originally appeared in literature as the demon in the Faust legend, and he has since appeared in other works as a stock character version of the Devil.