Utopia

Fearless and assiduous, in your Utopian quest, in no way dithering it cannot be suppressed.

Trials and tribulations so heavily weigh, your mind being sculpted into residual clay…

 

Does such a place exist at all; cleverly concealed we cower and crawl. Falling victim to sumptuous pleasure, there’s no pot of gold no buried treasure.

 

A mythological tale of notoriety, a frivolous existence of a moribund society. Still many come to embrace and believe corrupted morals as they taunt and deceive.

 

Hidden out there amongst lush green valleys and tepid blue skies, this Terra fir-ma of fertility, is the devil in disguise. Some roads less traveled the burden extreme, the hunger pangs for a new life a diluted regime.

 

Is this world what it appears to be? Look around you it’s a voluntary travesty. Wars and hunger it makes no sense, homeless rapacity and pestilence. Is this what we have truly become? Primordial ooze reduced to pond scum?

Reviews

[Deron Alexis]

very good the way you described what was going on in the world very real it took me somewhere else .the description of the world as it is was also very effective the 4th stanza really had an effect on me cause the quest for utopia has really brought allot of suffering while also bringing hope interesting concept well done.

[Dream Weaver]

Thanks Devon, I appreciate the look...All we have to do is just see what's going on around us and we could write a billion poems my friend!

[Deron Alexis]

well said

[LA Lorena]

I love the last line too! I loved all of it, but that last line was the icing on the cake for me! Good job you've done with this.

What font are you using here? I quite like it, and it does not appear to be a staple of WC....what's the secret?

[Dream Weaver]

Thanks LA your write was the inspiration for this so I really can't take any
credit..Glad you enjoyed it... I'll email you the secret to the fonts lol

[Frieda P]

It's an eloquent rant. Love the last line...

'Primordial ooze reduced to pond scum'
really says it all...sad state of affairs we're in.

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you Frieda, this was inspired by a friends write whom just happens to be on here as well..

[Frieda P]

It's very nice, also last line reminded me of my last boyfriend. ;-)

[Dream Weaver]

OMG! That's too funny! ;)~

[MOON]

Poignant write , sad but true Utopia a broken dream. The earth in ruins so to speak. Thought provoking write. Love the last paragraph. Well said !

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you Moon, much appreciated...