Manifestations

A Poem by Dream Weaver

Hmm?

How do I change what has taken a life time to achieve? Unanswered questions way so heavily on my mind.

I’m grasping at translucent dreams, wading in waters of moonlit reflections. I've become subservient to surrealism in its purist form. A pariah in my own cataclysmic world created from resurgent dreamscapes.

How I wish my existence could have made a small contribution to society. Instead of lunatic ravings I've so easily indoctrinated, my words have weight only to sink deeper into the abyss.

Life is a series of sporadic pain pleasure and par amnesia. Mortality lives through those who have a vision of clear persistence for life itself.

© 2013 Dream Weaver

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Nautili

"A passion and persistence for life itself"-I had a visual of a tree growing on the edge of a rocky cliff. Oh,that we would have that kind of determination to live, despite the adverse climate. I liked this. Very introspective without being maudilin.

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thank you Nautili, determination and adversity is spot on...again thanks very much for your review.<.. read more

Liza

i enjoy this style of writing most because as i read; i am in your shoes; getting and feeling from the point of "i"....the genuine courage to share the deepest corners with you - i feel i have peeked in to myself as well....

the flow was effortless, intelligent, dark but not scary...just real.

your vocabulary was expansive. now i must look up paramnesia...

only extra letter and typo i saw exsistance

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Ah dear Liza, Thanks very much for being in tune with me once again.
I find it challenging to .. read more

Poetic Beauty

Dreamscapes are a grand place as long as we know they are a grand escape. Achieve the dreams that are tangible and enjoy the ethereal ones for what they are