Aquatints

Aquatints

A Poem by JohnL
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The Shape of Words

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    Symbols of the Eucharist.
 
 Aquatints fly across vaulted space,
        settling on Rock of Ages’,
          mason-marked blocks
    receiving Heaven’s projections
Fluttered before worshippers’ eyes,
         through drifting incense
                  sound, light,
                      vapour
                     crossed
                    by organ’s
                  counterpoint
          and vertically rising song.
 
                          A
                  Wine-filled
            chalice gleams; the
       platter displays its bread;  
       Church on Earth communes
               With God in Holy
                     Eucharist.
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                          John L. Berry,  24 January 2009

 

 
 

© 2009 JohnL


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Oh this is beautiful! Both construction and words are utterly appropriate, and, written with great delicacy

' sound, light, / vapour / crossed /by organ's /counterpoint / and vertically rising song. ' - what exquisite phrasing.

This will go into Favourites, John, thank you very much for sharing such a special piece of writing.

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This is so profoundly beautiful, written with a great sense of the depth of God's mystery that fills the sacred moment. Wonderfully expressive and vivid in form.

Posted 14 Years Ago


What a wonderful snapshot, I could feel myself transported. This poem appeals to all the senses and left me feeling comforted. Just lovely.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes the Word refreshes . . .

this is just such an example of that.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Oh this is beautiful! Both construction and words are utterly appropriate, and, written with great delicacy

' sound, light, / vapour / crossed /by organ's /counterpoint / and vertically rising song. ' - what exquisite phrasing.

This will go into Favourites, John, thank you very much for sharing such a special piece of writing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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JohnL
JohnL

Wirral Peninsula, United Kingdom



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I live in England, and love the English countryside, the music of Elgar and Holst which describes it so beautifully and the poetry of John Clare, the 'peasant poet' and Gerard Manley Hopkins, which d.. more..

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