Beautiful ocean

I wrote this poem to try to explain how beautiful the ocean really is. Not just the color or how the waves crash on the rocks but what it is. Also what it is to the creatures of the ocean.

Upon the rocks,

I see out into the ocean,

I hear the waves crash against the rocks,

I smell the saltiness of the ocean,

I feel the cool breeze on my face,

I taste the bitterness of the air,

And the ocean speaks to me.

 

Upon the rocks,

I can see the seagulls fly as I walk along the shoreline,

As I walk I find Shells and realize It was once a home for some creature,

But they moved on as we do,

Although it is still just a shell,

As I walk further down I see how things have change over time,

And how they will change,

And as I walk I see a crack on the rocks that will one day be a cave,

And as I walk I see more of the oceans beauty,

That it’s not just a bunch of water,

It’s a home,

It’s a creator of beautiful things

And it’s a whole other world,

And the ocean speaks through me.

Author's Note

I wrote this poem to try to explain how beautiful the ocean really is.
Not just the color or how the waves crash on the rocks but what it is.
Also what it is to the creatures of the ocean.
And I hope you like it. :D

Reviews

[yuki]

You did a great job explaining this and i love the ocean so its a good write :)