jump, the rope around your neck will save you

jump, the rope around your neck will save you

A Poem by Seven

Your skin

 

you're wearing it as if

it were three sizes to small

 

step outside

breathe!

show some f*****g bravery.

© 2008 Seven


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Powerful thoughts mingling into a stunning visual. The emotion and challenge are gripping!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This entire thing, title to end, is just BOLD. How am I not to like it? So often the title just isn't an integral part of a poem or story... Well done. I love this.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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This entire thing, title to end, is just BOLD. How am I not to like it? So often the title just isn't an integral part of a poem or story... Well done. I love this.

Posted 15 Years Ago


The title to this is brilliant! Love it! Love it! Love it! Not sure if it fits with the poem though, although I do like it (the poem). It is very "matter of fact" and to the point. Makes me feel like I need a new birthday suit. Excellent.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 9, 2008

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Little Rock, AR



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