My Story, Your Story

My Story, Your Story

A Poem by Joey Nizz

My story and its chapters are not any different from any others
The foundations are alike
I've had ups and downs like any other who had it
I've had things that I loved disappear or taken 

I've made mistakes just like anyone else would
And from these mistakes, I've learned many things
In life, there are no for sure reasons
And no do-overs or repeats
Once it's done, it is done!
You must learn to fly step by step once you get wings

But just because of this story, my story
Isn't as exceptional nor as unique as I'd hoped it would be
That doesn't mean I'm not worthy to live 
I've gotten what I have earned

If you want your life to be accomplished and fulfilling
You have to believe in yourself
You have to believe that you can do anything and become anything
You are your own hero, your own story
Put yourself out there and be exciting and thrilling
Never be someone else!
Always Be you
The hero of your very own story
That'll amaze.

© 2018 Joey Nizz


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This is an amazing inspirational piece of writing! There are so many ways that it shines. First, to set things up, saying it’s OK to be ordinary. That’s where we all start out. Then, the way you gradually get to the point you’re making -- after taking your time getting the reader comfortable with where you’re coming from. This pacing is well done. I was lucky as a kid to be naturally effervescent, putting myself out there in lots of situations, so I gathered an amazing lifetime of memories. But lots of people are frozen in their self-consciousness, so you have good instincts in how to approach people who might feel this way. Such an uplifting message is always needed on t his website, becuz there are plenty of people feeling down or useless (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


I found this very encouraging. Thank you for sharing. This is great.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I'm glad that you did :)
Keep what u said in mind and life will be blissful.
Good poem!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I appreciate your thoughts about this writing ^^
Foundations are alike.
Very well said. Motivating and wise. Keep sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your review Najam ^^
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're most welcome ☺
Amazing wisdomand that through living life and knowing what you know- isn’t it wonderful that knowing- wasn’t easy to get to where you are but the lessons and wisdom accomplished is a blessing indeed- wonderful🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

6 Years Ago

I agree with you, to get the knowledge from life you have to live it to share its wisdom.
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Added on April 29, 2018
Last Updated on April 29, 2018
Tags: Story, mistakes, accomplishment, fulfilling, thrilling, hero, excitement

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Joey Nizz
Joey Nizz

Manama, Reef Island, Bahrain



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Whatever the mind and heart creates, I put it down with my pen on a paper, whatever inspires me and whatever inspires others, I got to share the inspiration and the knowledge and the hardship that I a.. more..

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