Bubbles

BUBBLES!

And I'm not talking about the ones we make with a bubble blower

I'm talking about the bubble some of us are trapped in, whether it's because of annoyance, anger, depression, boredom, and heck if one bubble that has them all!

You gotta burst out of it, it's not really worth to be stuck in a bubble that'll stop us from doing the things we love or pursuing what we really want.

You see,

You will never break free from your bubble if you don't believe in yourself enough, you will only feel useless and unworthy and all of the negative thoughts will be stuck with you in that bubble you're in and that's why you are like this!

Just do it, break free break out of it, pierce that bubble and breathe and do what you love, your like anyone or even better than anyone so don't lose your self in that bubble of the negativity of yours.

Live life how you want it too no matter how many barricades or people in front of you to stop you from pursuing your dreams, your goals, pop the bubbles and carry onwards to your goals and start living the dream you always had.

Bubbles, funny isn't it? how can something that can be popped so easily, can be the thickest thing to break out from, but hey.

Its all in your head, once you let the negativity take control, your mind will make you think that its difficult to break outta of it and run towards your goals and dreams.

Have a clear mind, live positively and block all of the negativeness, have and live in a happy bubble.

Reviews

[Jes' Pi]

That's really true...It reminds me of W.B. Yeats..."break the circle"

[Joey Nizz]

I see the resemblance, thanks for pointing out and for your review!

[Black Jess]

Very Nice !
You elaborated a delicate subject that is very common and spread out in society. It is absolutely true, we do need to get out from the " bubble " and enjoy the life out there, for there are so many beautiful things out there that are waiting for us to explore them ! Life isn't easy, that is true, but it's up to us to see the good side of things no matter how deep we're stuck in the darkness, and that is an accomplishement, once done will bring us happiness .
Thank you for your bright writing. We do need from time to time to see that people still write to raise hope and cheer up and not just sad emotions .

[Joey Nizz]

Im glad that you agree Jess, and exactly we should all just pop out of it and see the world, see what life has stored for us, and I totally agree with you, it is up to us to shine in the darkness, it is our action in the end and no one else's.

You are very much welcome, thank you for reviewing it ^^
Sometimes words can help and cure some people, and in the end it'll make us feel good by juts knowing that our words have put up a smile on someones face.

[Black Jess]

And i bet that your words particularly have brought the broken souls to the loving world ^^
You're very welcome ^•^

[Joey Nizz]

hehe i sure hope your right Jess ^^

[Saumya]

A 'positively bubbled' life is all everyone truly deserves! *Smiles*
Beautifully metaphor, and beautiful theme :)

Life is no more than a bubble, because we know not what the next moment holds for u! It's better to live in a happy bubble therefore!
Nice thought, Joey!😊

[Joey Nizz]

I agree with you, life is more than a bubble indeed but to see this life and live it, one must burst out of the bubble if he or she has it, because some people are just too closed in to see what life has to offer.

Thank you for reading and your review ^^

[Saumya]

You're most welcome, Joey.😊

[Davidgeo]

Word economy. Excellent sentiment but, you should re write this with the phrase 'word economy' in mind. Or change it to an essay and flesh it out a bit more. This reads kinda clunky as a poem, but it does have significant meaning none the less. It kind of exists in writing purgatory at the moment. In my opinion anyway. I'd just pander and pretend otherwise, give you a fluffy BS review but, I actually respect you as a writer so I can't really do that.

[Joey Nizz]

We all are intitled to out opinion and I respect everyones opinion whether its a negative one or not, negative opinion do help me learn to be better by fixing the mistakes, and thank you for pointing things out it'll help me to avoid the same mistakes in my future writings. so thank again for your help and review.

[Davidgeo]

You don't need to explain that to me, I already know that s**t or I would not have left the comment. Just take it and apply it or leave it and ignore me. (Entitled is not spelled with an 'I' f.y.i.). Your mechanics are sloppy to the point of obscuring your meaning. . . be more disciplined, be less cordial. Unless you're not really here for the writing and just here for the platitudes.

[apennylate]

This comes at a great time... I am choosing to leave a bubble of negativity and make strides for a better tomorrow within myself... Thanks, Joey

[Joey Nizz]

Always pop those bubbles, whether its negative bubbles or anger or sadness or any of that sort, just pop them, and live you deserve it :)

[apennylate]

Pop goes the bubble... Hah, thanks, Joey

[Joey Nizz]

Lol your welcome.

[Gee]

I'll raise a glass to that Joey, be a glass half full type and not the other

[Joey Nizz]

Cheers, sometimes its all that needed, not to be full but half.

Thank you for your review. :)

[KT-B]

I'm stuck in a bubble, need a pin to burst it - good work loved this inspiring, uplifting read :)

[Joey Nizz]

I hope you will burst out of it :)
Thank you for your review.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

break free from the bubble to show who you are. thanks for the nice poem.

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome Roxane, thank you for reviewing :)

[Najam Us Saher]

What a lovely metaphor of a bubble. You packed the meaning, inspiring thoughts in a bubble and that message carried inside it was able to reach the readers. I loved this so much, I am reading such a positive work on a very good day i.e when I need it the most. Thank you very much for writing this and sharing this at the exact time.

[Joey Nizz]

Im glad that ran into it when you needed something like this today and you are very much welcome as usual najam, thank you for your review ^^

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome ☺

[Ardra]

Live bubble free... :) good one Joey ..

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you im glad you liked it! :)