Journal Entry 1

Something happened right in front of me this morning, and I was amazed! as I was driving to work a pick up truck was driving right in front of me and it suddenly stopped and I almost hit it but I managed to swerve my car and I have managed to stop in time, I was just about to throw a tantrum at him but after seeing the reason for what he did, it made me quiet and amazed, he actually stopped suddenly because there was a pigeon crossing the road and instead of flying, he suddenly stopped so he wouldn't hit it, and the pigeon was right there in front of him didn't even fly away out of fear or anything.. I couldn't believe what I saw because if it was someone else they would have just ran it over and drove away...

His actions kinda restored my faith a little bit in humanity, when I thought that humanity is lost, especially nowadays.

Humanity isn't the same as it used to be, I mean having it anyway, people started to lack it and started focusing on things that aren't important.

You see, you don't really need a religion to have humanity or empathy to tell you the difference from whats right and from whats wrong, sometimes you'll have to know it yourself from deep inside of your heart, stop thinking for a while and start to listen to what your heart has to say...

Reviews

[Zoya]

Right. Humanity still does exist...in some sane human beings. I totally agree with the words of the last para. Religion isn't important...humanity is all that matters. Nicely written.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you very much Zoe, Humans do lack humanity but you would be surprised of the ones that do.

[Zoya]

You're welcome

[CAPOLAVORO]

This one could be a great story for me.. A journal, I respect how you talk about humanity that way. :)

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you very much, I appreciate your review about this ^^

[Glen's not so clean sla..]

Hey, just wanted to let you know I really dig your journal entry. Especially the pigeon bit...... Classic :-) well penned my sweet friend :-)

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you very much!
Im glad that you liked it an I appreciate your comment :)

[pia]

the message here is great and i agree with every word here. i personally hold humanity above religion.
a lil criticism however, is that the use of punctuation and a lil structure would be great and would malk this even better !!

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you very much for your review Pia.
and yes I agree with you with the criticism, its something that I saw happening infront of my eyes on that very morning that was amazing and I wish I wrote it better, your views and everyone elses will help me avoid future mistakes, so thank you very much I appreciate it :)

[Rassoul]

You could've made it longer, I feel like you still have more to say about this story, it's a really good one.

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks Rassoul, yeah I could've but it all I had to say in the neck of time.
But you're right, next time it shall.

Thanks again.

[Joanna Matilda Barlow]

You know... With just a little more work... You could create something to establish a sincere creative story.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you for your review, Ill work hard on it to create it on the next one :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

That's really good and very well penned buddy

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you Farhan :)

[Priyanshi]

Wow..great job done by the man.and very well written, Joey.

[Joey Nizz]

Yeah I agree, and thank you for your kind review :)

[Priyanshi]

my pleasure.

[Ardra]

its nicely done joey... :)

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you :)

[Najam Us Saher]

These days, I am coming across more essays and short stories which have humanity as their theme. This is a humane act and very polite message to be kind towards animals. I really liked this.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you Najam i'm glad that you do ^^

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. :)