Kin

She is the first female that ever existed in your life as a friend

No one and I mean NO ONE will ever be able to get you and understand you and  your craziness like your sister!

And even though you two don't see each other as much or get along whatsoever, she will always remain that one friend that lived by your side all these years and will always be there for you when you need her the most!

Other people come and go in life; your life!

But your sister will always be in your heart for a lifetime. As you are in hers. 

Whether you're side by side or even miles apart.

You two are connected by heart and whatever happens

You will always be there for one another.

If you have a sister or a brother it doesn't matter, tell them that you love them for always being there for each other all these years.

Reviews

[pia]

Awww this made me tear up!!!
Made me love my baby brother even more
Gonna save this and send it to him when he grows up!!

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you very much I'm really glad you liked it and I hope he will see it once he grows up ^^

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yep, sister do understand us more than anyone else except mother, she is one of the finest gift from God

[Joey Nizz]

Of course! Mothers not one of the best but THE best and only wonder of the world.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Correct...

[Nigel Newman]

Hi Joey. I've been musing for a while about 'what is a poem'? Of course it doesn't actually matter. The writing stands or falls, but even taking account of that, I think WC is missing a classification somewhere halfway between poem and story - maybe 'prose'. I mention this because what you've written would not fit my definition of a poem, and yet it has a powerful and important message that is well argued. It would be great read aloud, maybe almost from a pulpit or the front of a classroom.

There are several basic proof-reading errors
- through should be though
- a long should be along
- whats so ever should be whatsoever
- for you [add 'when'] you need her the most
- in life - your life [or ';' a comma is not strong enough punctuation here]
- Whether if your side ... should probably be 'Whether you're side ...'
- one and other should be one another

Hope this helps
BRs Nigel

[Joey Nizz]

I am really grateful for your help, I have fixed the errors in this writing with whats more suitable.

Thank you.

[CAPOLAVORO]

I hope my little brother would write like this for me. I miss my two little princes now Joey. Thank you for the beautiful poem.

[Joey Nizz]

Aww I bet you where ever they are now they miss you too!

Thank you I'm glad you liked it ^^

[Hope]

They make our life complete....
Thanks for sharing such a wonderful work, Joey:)

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome Naat! Im glad you enjoyed it ^^

[Hope]

My pleasure......

[Enchanted-Raven]

Lovely read my friend, enjoyed :) x

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you, I'm glad that you did ^^

[JessyJacob]

Nice feelings expressed for Sister and her love.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you :)