change

That life of yours will innovate once you generate peace with your shadow and its shades.

The larva will develop and become a magnificent elegant butterfly with its beauty. 

You will no longer have to wear that masquerade and pretend to be someone that you are not! 

You will no longer have to justify that your good enough.

Once you grasp and embrace your shadow you will no longer have to live in angst or fear. 

Find the endowment of your shadow and its shades and you will finally bash in all glory of your true self.

Then you will have the freedom to create the life you have always longed for.

Reviews

[Abhishek Asthana]

its a joy to read this kind stuff from your end,,, my favorite line is" You will no longer have to wear that masquerade and pretend to be someone that you are not!".. really touched... great work

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks man Im glad you enjoyed it! ^^

[duff]

I like this. The present times could use a bit more optimism. I'd like to think we are evolving until our finale. Your flow is smooth and the opening line is sick. Really enjoyed reading this. Nice job.

[Joey Nizz]

Im glad that you did!
And your right, in this present time (our present time) could use more optimism to keep going till the very end!

Thank you for your review :)

[duff]

You're very welcome:)

[CAPOLAVORO]

Your words of encouragement again Joey. So fine and pure. Good to apply always. :)

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you for your review! I'm glad you found it encouraging :)

[Hope]

So true...
"Just be you"- that is what is needed.
Accept ourselves and we will be free forever...
Great work:)

[Joey Nizz]

Yes I agree with you!

Thank you :)

[Hope]

My pleasure......

[Najam Us Saher]

Very empowering and influencing message. Truly beautifully written.

[Joey Nizz]

Im glad you think so as well
Thanks najam :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[Tabby Mac]

This is truth at its finest! I love this! my only critic is although this is empowering and inspiring it is far harder than it sounds. Some of us had many shades to get through! LOL But everyone needs to start somewhere!
I love that you write to encourage! I can both feel and hear the passion behind your words as I read! Well done!!
Tabby

[Joey Nizz]

Lol yes I agree, it might sound harder than it looks but like you said, we gotta start somewhere one way or and other, I think if its harder it might be better, because difficulty gives us experience and confidence, these things will build inside of us and to be our structure in the change.

Thank you for your review Tabby, :)

[Tabby Mac]

My pleasure!! I was just s speaking from experience! ;) grateful for you!
Tabby

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you ^^

[JessyJacob]

But in the process of changing, people throw stones, as if they are flowers, we will be in complete embarrassment, atleast people should born from one family tree or similar one, others then they cant be there for the type they are, they will not be even a friend to Him. Yes I completely agree, 'change', it applies to everyone, and dont get into misstrap that they are the best ones. I Know myself, and changing, from when i got first stone hit, where I couldnt save myself, but too many stones or bullets around, its getting difficult to learn swimming right away to go to a shore, otherwise she will be sinked from the ship, at the least to live, to go through natural laws.

But two of your writings are really inspiring, and learned experiences. I was just going through my life, whether I had applied to my correct knowledge, just not to curse anybody. These are mere Electromagnetic waves generated with less intensity, it doesnt become high, I mean i dont bark but talk nicely, and no one is disrespected, you know I never disrespect anyone, these are only thoughts.

Yes I agree I need to or not change at all. But it is hurting in some of them, which is quite opposite my thing, it was bearable with my alterego, when it made a pool, then it is hitting hard to me, in the heart too. So trying to be fittest may not be best. But which again becomes best for you and me too.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you for thinking that they were inspiring, And yeah not everyone changes for the best. but thats their life and if they hurt anybody else with their change then they will get it back, someday.

[JessyJacob]

I know the life style, but things are going beyond control, so I reacted, you might also knew, by now, I am redundant, because of responsibilities. Otherwise I live with myself, just talking to surroundings, my heart cries when I dont have, anybody around, who care for me, but I too need family.

[Joey Nizz]

You can express your self as you like, I wouldnt mind :)

[Enchanted-Raven]

Empowering read......enjoyed :) x

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you I'm glad that you did ^^
Thanks you for your review.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Nicely written,
In the start two words
"That life of yours will innovate once you generate peace with your shadow and its shades."
My favorite lines above, the beauty of that line was those two words "innovate and generate"
I also like the end of the poem with it's message about change..
Really loved it.

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks im glad you liked it! ^^
Thank you for your review!

[pia]

I love this so much
It gives so much hope !! And is very well written as well

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you very much Pia, Im glad you liked it! ^^
Thank you for your review! :)