The Crown

You, yeah you! you're the one who is wearing that smile and can't really take it off when last night you couldn't shut your eyes and hardly got any sleep.

Your selfies though, they tell another story! a different story from what I'm about to tell you, the one you don't want anyone else to know.

Happiness is what you show on the surface but deep down there is pain in your very soul. I think the world of you. The way you stand upright, always refusing to fall, you always walk through the madness and if you had to, you would actually crawl, so to the strongest souls I know, to the ones and everyone who is reading this right now!

definitely, there will be very painful scarring moments in your life that will change your perspective and how you see the world and will change your entire world in a matter of minutes, no no in a matter of seconds! if not a split of them!

Believe me, these moments will change you.

So what, Let them!

Let them make you stronger, smarter and kinder, but hey now don't you go and become someone your not, someones who is not you, someone you will hate to be.

Cry, scream if you have to!

Then straighten out that crown of yours and keep moving.

When the world throws everything at you with all of its punches, defend yourself and adjust your crown and walk with your head held up high!

Reviews

[apennylate]

I adjust my crown imperceptibly, and then I judge the myself valiantly... Thank you for once again putting a smile on my face... Happily penned...

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks, Im glad that it did! ^^

[apennylate]

Mhm......!

[Cobblestone Traveler]

This hit me in my core. You have some raw emotion in this and you displayed it well. Thank you for sharing!

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you for reviewing and your welcome, I am glad you liked it, it means a lot!

[Mel Jayne]

That's a really inspired piece. I could feel the realness and raw emotion. You are a very good motivational writer. I havent seen that many pieces on this website in this form.

[Joey Nizz]

I love to pour my thoughts in writing, I learned to never keep it in, whether if its happy or not, just take it out its not good to keep it in, I always feel good after I write something and if that makes others feel good also I am more than happy :)
I love to write everyday I write more and more, and I get inspired by whatever I wrote last.

Thank you for your time by commenting on this :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Very inspiring. I really liked this and the way you make your words enter deep in reader's heart and mind.

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks Najam!
It always makes me happy to read you comments!
Im glad you liked this one ^^

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[Sinbulvinter]

I like your writing. You have a lot of passion and a great moral message to what you write that shines of humanity and maturity.
I like the message of this one, it's quite beautiful

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you!
Im glad you like it, some people say that humanity is dead and I agree, but there is still hope for the ones that still have it or for the ones that need something to remind them of how beautiful humanity can be.

Thanks again, I appreciate it. :)

[CAPOLAVORO]

Why are you so good at making these kind of stuffs. You are such a guy who is full of passion for humanity. Pieces of yours are great with love and satisfaction. Keep writing.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you for your heartfelt comment!
I like to pick up the ones that are down, or inspire them, no one ever did that to me so I kinda know the feeling when someone else is like how I was.

Thanks again for your comment! ^^

[Jes' Pi]

Inspirational...as always.
You should put those little stories you make in a big one, and show the message of the story without saying it directly. ;) Good one.

[Joey Nizz]

hehe I like your idea, I actually thought of doing something like that, but who knows maybe one day :p

Thanks anyways Atashusi! I appreciate it.

[Ardra]

Joey you should be awarded the inspirational speaker of the year :)

adjust your crown and walk with your head held up high!
That line did inspire Me a lot hehe...thank you for being such a wonderful human being you are who spreads light and inspiration to many at cafe ... God surely is going to bless you with abundance and love ..my good friend...I will post in a recommendation from my side heheh
Maybe we can publish your book the pick you up poems...when feeling down. :)

[Joey Nizz]

Lol me? nahhh just juggling some letters into words here and there :p

I am very glad that you got inspired from even one line not the whole thing as long as something in that writing made you feel good.

Your very much welcome and I appreciate it, as long as you and others are happy I feel good about myself you know and I am always happy to know that my words have helped someone.
Hehe thanks really your support and praise are more than enough! ^^

[Abhishek Asthana]

"Happiness is what you show on the surface but deep down there is pain in your very soul"....
these lines r so touchy... i agreed with the point that one should adjust his/her crown at times... nice creation

[Joey Nizz]

Yeah exactly! I'mg glad your also agree. :)