Nice piece of truth there buddy-oh. Simple expressions can lead to even more heartbreak than what they began with, as the person you are saying "Sorry" to knows that that's a lie.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Your absolutely right my friend!
Your comment was sport on and for it I thank you very much!<.. read moreYour absolutely right my friend!
Your comment was sport on and for it I thank you very much!
Sorry... a simple word, but so hard to say when you actually and truly mean it.
You are completely right that some people just say it and its just another word to them. It's sad when this happens and the person on the receiving is being lied too.
But it is those who have lied, will be the sorry ones in the end - sooner or later, they will lose face and respect from others around.
Yes I agree, its not as simple as you think, it might look easy but saying is really hard. they will.. read moreYes I agree, its not as simple as you think, it might look easy but saying is really hard. they will lose it all by just lying about that one word "sorry"
Just be real to be me and to your self.
Thanks for your review Mark.
7 Years Ago
Be real. Best way to be. Honesty is the best policy. Many people in my life have come and gone, but.. read moreBe real. Best way to be. Honesty is the best policy. Many people in my life have come and gone, but the few that now remain are the ones i trust.
Mark.
7 Years Ago
If they stayed by your side till now then return the favor and stay by theirs.
And yeah peopl.. read moreIf they stayed by your side till now then return the favor and stay by theirs.
And yeah people do come and go in your life no matter how long you knew them, but the close one will always stay by you. so keep them close to our heart because im pretty sure their keeping you to theirs.
Yeah, why lie when you apologize if you know it will also hurt you as well, sometimes I don't unders.. read moreYeah, why lie when you apologize if you know it will also hurt you as well, sometimes I don't understand people.
Just mean it.
Thank you for your review.
7 Years Ago
We come across variety of people in our life and have to deal with them. You are welcome.
7 Years Ago
True, each one differently we cant treat everyone the same.
Many people likes to make all the things simplier and they just say sorry. This is for me is the first step of repentance and theres more if you are serious about chaging up. If not, keep doing the first step and you'll never reached learning. Only regret. Good piece. Keep writing.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
I agree with what you said, some people do find it just simpler by just saying it so they can get aw.. read moreI agree with what you said, some people do find it just simpler by just saying it so they can get away with it.
I like this poem, because I feel if someone apologizes that means they don't plan on doing it again!
If someone apologizes to me, I never say it's okay. I say I accept it, because what they did was not okay..
Good reading for me.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
I agree with you, some people just say to shut someone up and move on, but its not the way, say it l.. read moreI agree with you, some people just say to shut someone up and move on, but its not the way, say it like you mean it you know?
Cool poem. Very deep. You are very good at writing about human emotion and sincerity. Maybe you could change some of the words around so that your writing picks up a different mature quality and professionalism, for example you could change 'Only then, You will realize, That they also did not just hurt you,But also them,Just as much.' to Only then, will you realise, they didn't just hurt you,
they hurt themselves, just as much.' I hope this makes sense I just want to help a fellow writer out.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you for thinking so.
I guess cause I know how others feel, and cause I know how will i .. read moreThank you for thinking so.
I guess cause I know how others feel, and cause I know how will i feel if it happened to me and some did actually.
It actually does make sense, and thank you very much for you help, I'm always happy to hear others views and opinions because everyone's opinion matters.
And thank you very much I made the change because it made more sense actually, Thank you!
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