You'll Never Know

Always in doubt, but I stand my ground

Insecure, but strong

Mind always wonders, but always thinks straight

Dumb, but intelligent

Absent, But always present when needed

Unattractive, but I am beautiful

Always alone, but I'm loved

Not a whole, but happy

In melancholy mood, but I smile

Broken, but hey you'll never know.

Reviews

[CAPOLAVORO]

The good things you see while you are in the middle of nowhere already. Great comparison. Keep writing. :)

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you im glad you think so ^^

[JessyJacob]

It may look inspiration, for readers, as I can only tell them as inspiration, i cant make them to do, but one who is struggling, knows the pain and value of it, dont grab anything until it is not yours, there is a way to have your own, because you will be punished if you grab others, though at the end, you will show, no just lied, as if not done, but taking advantage or exploiting, something, turns to you as your misery. So be with yourself, dont steal, get what is attached or what you need or what you supposed to get. Hence everyone has their own struggle, but this earth, is everybody's and it will see what it needs to see, because others are also writing fate, dont think if you grab it is just yours, it just shows how much trash you are getting in, you need to clean that, otherwise, you will die with that disease. Righteous ness teaches you right things, only, you will only fall sick, if you eat more or grab free stuff or steal somebody's. Do one thing at a time, which is important to you.

Yes I did really cared then and now also, it was never sympathy, it was just pure care, which turned love and then turned hate, and I stopped it, may be I can help you in knowing what i am doing.

I appreciate your smartness, who all are witing in this WC site, multiple things at a time, fu...Ng her, by making sick other, and enjoying their life.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you for you appreciation and thank you for taking time to comment :)

[JessyJacob]

I feel you are looking as if I have done favor, without valuing what it is gone, somebody's health, son, job, money, and still recovering. yes when people dont understand the real woth what someone has done, you just see it as evil or good without values given to it.

[JessyJacob]

I dont need anything in return, just memorize the past, atleast you feel like respecting.

[Najam Us Saher]

Beautiful heart touching lines. Well written.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you for thinking so Najam! ^^

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[Ardra]

In melancholy mood, but I smile
Broken, but hey you'll never know.

:) you write beautifully joey... simple yet profound words..
check the new one i posted let me know what you think

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you Ria!
Im glad you like my writing, your comments mean a lot :)