Note is also for anyone who is reading this.
It doesn't matter who you are and where your from, and what are you going through, try to be yourself, life is short so enjoy it in anyway you can.
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What a great poem!
I love this line: Stop treating yourself like an after thought
We all do it...more than we like to admit.
Nicely done!
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you, Im glad you liked it ^^
And I agree with you, we all do it more than we li.. read moreThank you, Im glad you liked it ^^
And I agree with you, we all do it more than we like to admit it, sometimes a person has to acknowledge what he or she have done that made their life easier, so that they find their way back into doing it again once their down :)
Im glad that it did! we always have to keep up a good smile even when we're feeling down, because th.. read moreIm glad that it did! we always have to keep up a good smile even when we're feeling down, because that smile will make us forget and move on.
I like how you make a story in delivering a powerful message to everyone. I also like how you made it very positive in a way that you inspire people to be happy. You would become a good inspirational writer. Make longer stories about these. Keep writing. :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you very much, im glad you liked it, I like to give hope or to inspire people to become bette.. read moreThank you very much, im glad you liked it, I like to give hope or to inspire people to become better or to believe their not alone.
I have a few others like this if you would like to give them a read.
Thanks for reviewing :)
At first, I thought I heard Em rapping in the background...I will always adore Marshall. 😉
Anywho, it was a wonderful read full of truth. Thank you for sharing.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Marshall is a legend!
Your welcome and thank you im glad you think so! ^^
I agree you have to live to the fullest, with high drink to full nasha, you dont know whether father f***s daughter or son f***s mother. You see this fun in newspaper. Please go to library see some news.
Dont enjoy somebody's life too, for your fullest, extracting everything, throwing not even a bone for dog, think of hunger, where people dont even have water to survive on this earth.
Very pathetic, to think this kind of luxury life, all best things are not for just one. People look so posh with ugly thoughts inside coverign them up with mud.
Note: Please give a note, make it clear, what fun you are talking about best things.
This is just a constructive criticism, you can see this type in newspaper too. I know somebody admires Journalism.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
You are right about the note, people can still do whatever they can to enjoy life no matter what sit.. read moreYou are right about the note, people can still do whatever they can to enjoy life no matter what situation they are in or how much or how less money they have, money isn't everything, a lot of us did'nt grow up with alot of money in their bank account or in their pockets, but we still find a way to enjoy life.
Focus, focus on your life and be happy you are alive! we can make a difference in our lives no matter who we are.
7 Years Ago
I see, I know a hunger kid gets food in dust bin, thrown by some rich people, he just thanks god and.. read moreI see, I know a hunger kid gets food in dust bin, thrown by some rich people, he just thanks god and to the rich people who threw food, enjoys his food so greedily(hungrily but looks greedily), becos he doesnt have that right to eat that food even, becos he didnt earn, but it is free food, and he must enjoy the food, becos, he cant get from his situation, becos that kid is 6yrs, where he cant or allowed to work, and cant even beg, becos he is very self respective, that I need to work, I need my parents, how can someone, kill my parents. Yes Poor people also enjoy with free food of air, as nobody has right over air, to say, I produced it, and you cant even breathe this air.
This is current generation mentality. Good going, very best of luck and success with your mentality.
I know bad only gives rise to bad things, no wonder, good never create bad.
Yeah good actions wont create anything bad, and also we should do as much as we can, anybody who is .. read moreYeah good actions wont create anything bad, and also we should do as much as we can, anybody who is able too, to do as much as they can to help the less fortunate, help the weak and poor because nor everybody can have the life they wish for, I do my part in my community, i give food and clothes and anything to help out, because what if i was in hes place? wouldn't i want anyone to give me a hand?
You have a good heart, and people with good hearts are very hard to find now days, always stay good. the world needs good deeds, even if its coming only from one, at least there is hope.
it's nice :) but it's short,, you could have added more line but then also it's beautiful :) :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you very much, yeah i know i could've made it longer, i has the words i needed for it to be lo.. read moreThank you very much, yeah i know i could've made it longer, i has the words i needed for it to be longer but i kept them for my next writing, but thanks anyways I appreciate you trying to tell me i could do better for this write.
well not everybody has the chance or the money to live this way but i like the message
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
I know, probably most of don't but even if we don't we can at least try you know, in anyways you can.. read moreI know, probably most of don't but even if we don't we can at least try you know, in anyways you can, you dont have to go all out, just do it in a way that'll be good enough for you, you are doing this for yourself not anyone else in the end.
Whatever the mind and heart creates, I put it down with my pen on a paper, whatever inspires me and whatever inspires others, I got to share the inspiration and the knowledge and the hardship that I a.. more..