The Broken Versus The Evil ones

The Broken Versus The Evil ones

A Story by Joey Nizz

Never confuse someone who is broken for someones who is evil.
If you are broken you can be fixed, with time and space.
But if you are evil.. your a lost cause my friend, you can't be fixed.
When your evil all you'll do is cause pain and you are probably the reason why the person next to you is broken in the first place.
When your evil all you'll cause is pain, mayhem and chaos in other peoples lives and hearts.
A broken person on the other hand would never do any of those things because they already know how it feels like on the other side of those actions, already feeling the pain and chaos inside of their hearts unlike the evil ones with no hearts.
So never confuse the two, never confuse someone who can be saved with someone who needs to be saved from.

© 2017 Joey Nizz


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Your words are very true.
The question is though. Evil -Are people born like it OR what broke them to become evil in the first piece.

Its a debate that can go on forever, but nonetheless it was another well written/thought provoking piece.

Mark.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much Mark, I appreciate your thoughts and reviews.
And it can be both, some mi.. read more
Well said, Joey! As always, I enjoyed reading this :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

Thanks Gullia! im glad you've enjoyed it ^^
I sense your anger and wrath toward someone in this piece. I often find people who have been misjudged or misinterpreted. Pity to judge another so harshly, but I do enjoy this emotional piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

lol ow humanity, you have to have your own opinion, we all should, thats what makes everybody differ.. read more
Stacy Purvis

7 Years Ago

I know that's right. 😋
Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

haha yeah xD
Very deep and thouggtful. I liked the last line. Yes there is a huge contrast between a person who is heart broken and evil. It is a matter of time for a person to change from heart broken to evil person. They should never change no matter even the time changes. Beautifully written. I truly liked it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

Thank you Najam, and yeah your right, It is a matter of time until the broken becomes evil with time.. read more
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

Yes you are absolutely right. You're welcome ☺

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Added on March 26, 2017
Last Updated on March 28, 2017
Tags: Broken, evil

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Joey Nizz
Joey Nizz

Manama, Reef Island, Bahrain



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