Trapped

*Sigh*

I have always felt like I have been locked in a prison with no hope of escape

Always used to make scars on the walls just to keep track of the long lost days

When and where will my jaded, confused soul rest

Do i have to wait until there is nothing left for it deep inside?

Who will ever want this one, the one that is full of pain that i call my soul

The actions that I made for it made me look like nothing but a fool

Tell me something..

Can I.. can I really live with myself?

Or just stay here stuck in eternal darkness dwelling, all alone with no one can be found..

Can I see the light now? 

Please?

Can I see the rays of light so I can finally be free?

Or in loneliness shall i ever be?..

My life has no fate, it has been long since it's been gone

For the things that I have done that were so wrong

Do you think I still have a chance now? to be free'd from all my eternal sins?

No matter how much I'll strive now I can never have the win

The win over the darkness that's holding me too tight

I guess there's nothing else to do now but drown in my tears.

Reviews

[Malvika]

Wow I really like the poem , you have expressed very well and the flow of the poem is good. It is very difficult to fight the darkness be it in any form , if you stay too long it can be addictive and consume the person.

[Joey Nizz]

Yes, darkness comes in many forms and can be different in many ways.
Thank you very much for what you have said.

[CAPOLAVORO]

This is so pure that every words I read is calling my every bit of sense I have to answer the questions you are trying to imposed. Very good choice of words. Crying is not being weak Joey, Only brave persons could cry. ;)

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks for your review and i agree with you it takes a brave person to cry but sometimes in the moments of weakness, there's nothing else to do but cry. lol but i understood what you meant thanks Capolavoro.

[CAPOLAVORO]

You are very much welcome as always. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Simply true and relatable. Every emotion is very well expressed. I liked it

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks Najam, I appreciate it :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺