Broken Smile

Smiling with a broken smile never shows the pain

Acting and pretending that you're happy when your in the deepest of pains is just one of the best examples of how strong you are as a person

To be real, In reality

The strongest people are the ones that feel

The strongest have to feel in order to heal

Accept what happens and stay strong and move on

It's not the end of the world

Whatever happens, no matter how bad it is, it will be better with time

Pretending that you're strong doesn't really make you strong because everybody sees that you are strong by just pretending but when you're all alone that's when you're the weakest that's when everything comes pouring out

Just accept the facts and try to stay strong to move on, some people have it worse than you

Shouldn't you be thankful that it's not you?

Reviews

[Maria]

I recognized myself...To be real, In reality, that's kind of difficult

[Joey Nizz]

True, somethings can sure be difficult but they might get a little easier if you believe otherwise.

[Carol Cashes]

I used to think of my broken heart has being welded back together, and of course, the site of the welds is the the strongest. I have few untouched spaces on the face of my heart these days, and I never felt more capable, ready, up to whatever life wants to put in my path. You said it way better, though. But great minds think alike, eh?

[Joey Nizz]

Yeah I agree, great minds do think a like sometimes :)
A broken does heal with time or depending on how someone is when it comes to dealing with the pain, its all in the mind, your heart thinks from your own very mind, and once positive thoughts enter your mind then your heart might be at ease from the pain even if its for a split second, sometimes its all the time we need, just a split of a second to make us whole again or to make the heart whole again.

[Davidgeo]

It's a good, inspiring poem. Almost anyway, there are way too many grammatical errors. All 6 reviewers ought to be ashamed of themselves for not pointing them out.

They are as follows...

2nd line... you used the possessive 'your' instead of 'you're', twice.

10th line.... "...no matter how bad it is will be better with time" you should add another "it" or a comma after "is" (which is still kinda clunky sounding).

11th line.... you used the possessive 'your' when the contraction of you are 'you're' is appropriate. Again.

12th line... I would omit the word "okay" after "because"

13th line... you erroneously used the possessive "your". Twice. Again.

14th line... did you mean to use "purring"? I think you meant "pouring".

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks, I've made some changes, I don't usually check my work after I'm done writing.
Thanks for pointing out the mistakes, I appreciate it.

[Priyanshi]

Hey, this is something inspiring. Many a times I get to read such inspiring pieces from you...keep on writing.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you very much fro reading :)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you for this one Joey. It uplifts my soul like never before. As a girl I am sometimes called by my weaknesses and insecurities but I try to hide all out so that what people see is the strong side but then you wanted to break my walls. Might want to try your ways then. Keep writing!

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome and i'm glad that my words helped you.
It doesnt really matter if you were a girl or a boy or whatever, we should always be strong and be prepared for whatever comes at us, we should not be subdued by our weaknesses and insecurities, we should turn them around for our favors and make them our strength and learn from them to overcome and move on.

[Gee]

It was once thought of as a sign of weakness (by other men) for a man to show his feelings. Luckily over the years this has slowly changed.I like this Joey

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you for liking and reviewing this, and i don't believe that men should hide their feelings, you are only stronger and A man if you show them.

[Warrior]

wow I feel like you are talking to me that was amazing

but do you mean purring out or poring out

[Joey Nizz]

I'm glad that you liked this one, and yeah i think poring lol let me fix it.
Thanks for reviewing and showing me the mistake.

[Warrior]

yeah no problem

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Very inspirational poem indeed.
Wise words and very true words.
You clearly have a positive outlook on life.
It just isn't that easy for some of us to have such a positive attitude.
Great poem though, really enjoyed :)

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks for reviewing, and yea i agree it isn't easy. it's never easy actually.. sometimes if i wanna feel that way i write something that'll be positive to others, as long as it helped them then I'll feel good i guess and I am happy now to read these reviews about it.
Thanks again for reviewing :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your very much welcome :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes one should really be thankful in their bad times because it didn't get worse. I truly loved this. Thank you so much for sharing. ☺

[Joey Nizz]

Yes i agree, your welcome and thanks for reviewing Najam :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺