A Master Of Disguise

They drop and run down and fall off my cheeks

I cry in my dark room, away from everyone so they wouldn't see

You can follow their tracks like a horse race right down my chin

For years after years

Of letting them triumph

I cannot do anything else now but Surrender to them

My eyes hold stories

So deep and lost in the darkness of my anger and my pain

You really think that i'm unhappy?

Well..

Look again..

Look at these scars that remain..

Right under my shirt

From the dark past that i have been through

The scars are nothing but road maps to places that nobody knows

The smile that I gave you is nothing but a painting with rough colors

Surprised?

To see that i'm a true master of disguise?

But even a master such as myself got a weakness

The weakness is that you can see it all

By just looking into my eyes.

Reviews

[Stacy Purvis]

THIS IS FANTASTIC! Now, you're talkin'.
Aside from a few spelling errors, this piece is fabulous!!! Excellent job! Thank you for sharing.

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks Anastasia!
I'm sorry for any error that you've seen, ill fix my errors
Thanks for your review and comment! ^^

[Stacy Purvis]

Just trying to help you perfect your art. Thank you so much for sharing.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you very much I appreciate it very much and your welcome.

[Jes' Pi]

Wow..
I really liked this one Joey..The words are just perfect...You have got 100/100

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks Atashusi!
I'm really glad you liked it! ^^

[Najam Us Saher]

So deep and thoughtful. We all hide our feelings sometimes for the best and sometimes because that's the only option we've got.

[Joey Nizz]

Yeah your right.. sometimes we feel that no one will understand what we are feeling or going through so we hide it in us.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes exactly.....