The Ones That fall

They fall

Sometimes they have to fall

They fall like a drizzle in a day

Or a downpour in the night

Tears are the words and the language of your heart

Speaks of joy or sorrow

Tears are not a sign of weakness at all

It's a very intense sign of strength

Once you cry over something it doesn't mean you are weak and pathetic

No

It's a sign that you are strong enough to show you're true emotions

And it takes a lot for us to show who we really feel

The strongest person isn't the one who sheds tears down their cheeks

The strongest person is the one who shed's them and makes them all for the moment that are needed

Sometimes

You're memories do sneak out of you're eyes and roll down you're cheeks

But that only means you have great memories planted in your heart and you show them with those tears

Tears are the raindrops from the storm locked inside of us that find their way leaking out of us

The tears we bring aren't from the words our lips can't speak

We bring them down because this is how our hearts speaks of the pain or the powerful joy we felt deep inside our hearts

If it starts to drop from the right, they say it's happiness

If it starts to drop from the let, they say it's pain

Never hide the beautiful rain, a rain is always a good sign, whether its from the skies above or your eyes on top

Let it out, Let it all out

Because even when you're crying you're still beautiful.

Reviews

[Stacy Purvis]

Showing emotion is brave. Intense emotion in this piece. Thank you for sharing.

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks :)
And your welcome, showing emotions is brave, if you can face the fact and show how you really feel, your brave enough to take the next step in life.

[matrixmark]

From the pieces which I have read of your so far, you seem to excel in writing about feelings, wheter it be sadness/joy/uplifting or any others I haven't mention. You seem to be a person who cares a lot and your writing is always thoughtful and the words which you use are perfectly in context with the piece which you are writing about.
Another read which was well worth my time, I love the play on words which you use.

Mark.

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks Mark, your actually right, i like expressing how i feel in writing or music, and i try my best to excel in my writing, thanks for noticing :)
I hope my next writings will be enjoyable :)

[matrixmark]

Your pieces are always enjoyable, it shows you have a good understanding of emotions and have a good grip on expressing them via the power of words.
I shall be reading more of your work soon..
Mark.

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks Mark, I've been though a few emotions so i guess i can relate with them, Thanks again for your comments :)

[matrixmark]

I hear you loud and clear. Been there, done that.

Mark.

[Warrior]

If only we really were all beautiful when we cried. i always look like a mess.

you are a very perceptive and observative person
you're very right about tears showing our deepest strongest and most passionate emotions

this was great

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you, i like to learn about peoples emotions and i have learned enough and hoping to learn even more.
persons feelings are something beautiful to feel is something beautiful and its always beautiful to feel, whether its sadness to happiness it doesn't matter. sorry my reply was long lol.

[Warrior]

no problem i enjoy reading long comments that means the person took more than two seconds of their time on it

and i study psychology for fun so i know what you mean by peoples emotions i do the samething

[Najam Us Saher]

We bring them down because this is how our hearts speaks of the pain or the powerful joy we felt deep inside our hearts. I loved this line. What a lovely poem on tears. Well done. Because even when you are crying you are still beautiful.... not every man agrees to this. I say don't be a man to tell her not to cry be a gentleman to comfort her while she cries. That's what you have written I liked this. Thank you so much for sharing. (And i takes should be and it takes )

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you very much for your review, and thanks for pointing out the mistake, just fixed it.
And yeah i agree when you said "don't be a man to tell her not to cry be a gentleman to comfort her while she cries" that's what ill do if it happens
I'm glad you liked it ^^ thanks again

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad you liked the quote it is made by me. You're welcome ☺

[Joey Nizz]

Such a great one ^^

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you ☺

[Joey Nizz]

Your very much welcome ^^