Revolution

We have all sorts of freedoms

But

One of the most important ones is to be what you want and who you really are

You exchange in your reality for a role in life

You trade your senses for an act

You give up your ability to truly feel

And in return

You put on a mask

There cannot be any kind of larger scale of revaluation of any size

Until there is a personal revolution

Your revolution

On the next individual level

Its gotta happen deep inside

Inside of your heart

If you feel that your ready within your heart

Then let go

And go

Into the next step of revolution 

And be free.

Reviews

[APOORVA]

This one is a true one, practical and on the point.
liked it

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you i'm glad that you do :)

[matrixmark]

I just love the pices which you put on here.

This is simple for me to review but hidden behind my next 4 words is a lot of meaning.
I loved this piece.

Mark.

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks man i'm glad you did! ^^

[Stacy Purvis]

Did you mean to use "revaluation" or did you mean to use another word such as revolution or reevalution? Or revalation?

[Joey Nizz]

ops my bad i meant "revolution " ill fix it now thanks for noticing.

[Najam Us Saher]

The one of the most important ones is to be what you and who you really are. I agree with this line. Well written.

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks, you can re read it because i found some mistakes that i wanted different words instead.
read moreThanks, you can re read it because i found some mistakes that i wanted different words instead.
But thanks anyways :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Okay...You're welcome ☺