That feeling

  You know what

I know i'm not the only that hates that feeling

The feeling when you're alone minding your business in the comfort of your own home

When suddenly

That feeling comes when you're down for no reason and you don't even have a clue why

You just feel so lost, so confused and not too mention empty, but nothing really happened

You get asked whats wrong, and you can't explain it

Or they don't even ask anything after they notice, honestly i don't know which one is worse

Its just that

Its just feels like you're missing someone that you've never even met yet

Like you need someone who doesn't need you

The loneliness and emptiness just hovers over you and takes control

You start to isolate you're self from everyone on purpose and The sadness becomes you're only close friend

Then you start hating you're self for no reason and just want everybody to leave you alone

But

At the same time

You want someone to hug you and tell you

Things will be okay

Everything will be okay

Don't worry

I simply hate that feeling

The feeling when you don't even know whats going on with your feelings and why is it like an emotional hurricane inside of you

I just hate that feeling

Reviews

[Ankit Miglani]

That's the time people are introduced to themselves actually. We can go to both sides - the good or bad from that point. It's on us - Always has been. It is strong , this feeling and so is this piece of work. I hate this feeling too but for the moon , you got to take the sun. Can totally relate to it. Couldn't skip a single word . Thanks for trying to describe this unexplainable feeling . Keep up the good work.

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks for taking your time to read this :)
and yea i agree with you as well, this feeling will always be there even if there isn't anyone in particular we will still feel our hearts and minds are longing for someone or something, its crazy.

[matrixmark]

Very, very well written. I too get this feeling and it can't be explained. Your words have explained it perfectly, yet nobody can explain the feeling itself.

Mark.

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks for reviewing and your comment.
Its just weird right, i mean one second your fine and the next you feel this way.

[matrixmark]

Yes...its very odd. But then theres the next phase - the following day we feel fine and ar left wondering what it was all about.

Mark.

[Joey Nizz]

Yeah your right, we just sleep over it to forget about it, its not something that stays with you.

[matrixmark]

True words.

Mark.

[Najam Us Saher]

Why it always has to be such poems that I can precisely relate to right now. Thus is what it is. Well done. Amazing.

[Joey Nizz]

I guess it was a good coincidence, sometime your heart can take you to places and show you things you really need right now.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah exactly.....in the third line mining should be minding. Apart from it no mistakes.

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks ill fix it.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺