Fear

Fear

Something in all of us

We all have fears

Who ever says that their without fear

Doesn't know the true meaning of it.

Even the bravest soldiers who are trained to not fear got their own fears

Fear of failure

Fear of losing the ones we love

Fear of Disappointing the ones we value

And so on.

We all have our own different fears

Some are the same

But

We should all expose our selves to our deepest fears

and after that

Fear has nothing on us

No power over us

We should be strong and face all of our fears

And then

Just then

We will have total control over our fears

As it shrinks and vanishes

And when that does

You are free of it

My friend.

Reviews

[matrixmark]

Always a fan of your work Joey.

I like how you start off with how we all have our own fears and then finish it off with how to banish them. A well written piece on how to turn fear should fear itself (if you get what I men)

A well balanced piece.

Mark.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you mark, always a pleasure to hear from you.
Sometimes its best to fight fire with fire ad they say right? but this one, just expose fear to fear it self.

Thank you again.

[Carol Cashes]

I have few fears, none of them are deep or heavy like death, disease, disappointing loved ones, etc. Maybe because I'm older and no longer fear the inevitable, and I know I won't disappoint those I love. What I do fear, ugly snotface cryin' fear: roller coasters, driving behind auto transports, and narrow mountain roads with cliffs! I have to make one correction on the "heavy" or "deep" fears: that I will die before those I love without them knowing everything that needs to be said.

[Joey Nizz]

Its never too late to say, to speak of the things you need others or a few certain people in your life to hear, sometimes the things left unsaid can be our worst regret, whether if its in this life or the after life, trust me when I saw this, I also have things I didn't say to the ones that needed to hear and I almost lost my life once without them knowing. some are far lost and they don't know and now i cant find them to let them know.
But in the end its your call whether you want to let them know or not.

[CAPOLAVORO]

"Fear free".. love the idea of it. Fear could also be our best friends in some times you know like putting us unto the edge of safety. On the other hand, the view of fear in this one is somewhat a foe and a friend which makes it balance. Good write. ;)

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

[Joey Nizz]

I agree with you, fear can also be helpful to stop from making a mistake or something that we will regret later on.

Everything in life gotta have its balance, whether if its a feeling or anything else.

Thank you for your review :)

[Abraham George]

Fear?

everyone have to fear about something in this world and life. Otherwise we will become gods.

true lines and very nice presentation
we going brother

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks man i really appreciate your comments, and you are right, we are all human in the end.

[RavenBlack]

This is really relatable, I could connect with each word. My favourite being: "We all have fears
Who ever says that their without fear
Doesn't know the true meaning of it" because it's true.

My criticism would be to re-read your work as you spelt 'disappointing' wrong. Plus your structure seems more like a poem than a story.

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks for your review, and thanks i was just re reading it before i read your comment and noticed a couple of mistakes, thanks for the heads up.
And this is more of a journal than a story or poem.

[RavenBlack]

No problem :-D

[Joey Nizz]

^^ .

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. I loved the ending lines. We will have total control over our fears
As it shrinks and vanishes
And when that does
You are free of it
My friend.
I liked these lines too very much.
Fear of losing the ones we love
Fear of Disappointing the ones we value
These are the true fears one can face in their life. Beautifully written.

[Joey Nizz]

I am glad that you do, means a lot to me thank you Najam ^^

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome

[Abraham George]

Fear of losing the ones we love
Fear of Disappointing the ones we value
These are the true fears one can face in their life. Beautifully written.

this is the fear you are facing and i know that these lines you can relate to your life Najam. I understand

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes...you are right. I am glad to know that you can understand me.☺

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks Abraham and Najam :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome