First connection, Few words

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Sometimes  

It takes just few words to connect  

It takes short messages to feel  

Few words that catch your attention 

Make you smile.  

Suddenly you feel , you breath  

As you know, 

That on the other side of your screen 

Someone feels the same way, 

Experience your words in a special way 

Eager for you to write ,  

More words ,  

Someone special that is almost ,  

Just almost  

Like you 

 

You close your eyes, 

Let your imagination fly  

You share your most beautiful words,  

Bodies touch through the initial connection  

You feel as you are one,  

Bodies and souls 

  

Author's Note

Let me know what you feel

Reviews

[Beautiful Intentions]

Like crying... If you truly wish to know what I feel, how reading this had made me feel, than this is my answer... Like crying. One of the most beautiful poems that I have perhaps ever read, so utterly breathtaking that by the close I was left momentarily speechless. How did you do it? How could you capture the feeling, that sensation of being touched by the words, the exchange between writer and reader so majestically? In one word this is simply 'perfection'... From the prickled flesh in the photograph to every word across the page. As if I had that moment... Entranced, encased by everything you had spoke of, where I had connected to the writer, to you in such a way that it felt as if I could have written the words myself. This brings back so many fond memories of times when author's have moved mountains within me. Brings back irreplaceable feelings of such love and joy. Sigh... This was nostalgic, JMaster1. Love at first read.:) Don't believe this feeling of the bounding shared between two could have been better written.

[JMaster1]

Now you left me with no words , if my words could touch anyone the way it touched you , it mean that I did something good , when you write a poem , the poem become public and it's not yours anymore , it touch certain people in certain ways , others find secrets between the words , but only few , very few can deeply connect to the words , the way you did. This poem reached your heart because you needed those words , you needed someone to describe what you feel

[Beautiful Intentions]

Indeed, dear one.:) This should be added to my favorites, and I will correct that mishap now. I was so emotional yesterday after reading this, that I do believe that I had fled your page to catch my breath. Aha... Such memories it sparked. Such wondrous memories. I was purely taken by this poem... And every ounce of praise was the truth. Thank you for sharing it!

[jade]

Thats so good i loved how u rote it

[Naomi Tansell]

This reminds me of my previous relationship (which was a LDR), and how despite it being LDR, the intensity and emotions of when I submitted. I really like this.

[JMaster1]

Thank you :)

[Naomi Tansell]

You are most welcome.

[Kera]

I love this so much, I reminds me of the connection a friend and I have, she's from Canada and we have the best connection out of any friends I have near me.

[alyssa whelan]

I love this so much, I can relate to this so much! Beautiful work!

[Elizabeth Rae]

I can relate to this, I think you did a good job capturing the emotions accompanied by a deep connection with someone. You understand time truly means nothing. The only thing I would change would be the flow, its kind of slow (at least I read it slowly) where as those emotions sometimes seem to flow faster than the speed of sound itself.

[Dionne]

Wonderful. I love the modern touch and the simplistic beauty.

[Shy_muse]

This is very touching... or rather, you don't need to be physically touching to feel love, connection and passion. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful poem. It is reasons like this that I am a writer. < 3

[JMaster1]

That's the best review I received for so long time , I am glad you like it

[Justine Johnston]

This is beautiful.

"Someone feels the same way,
Experience your words in a special way
Eager for you to write ,
More words ,
Someone special that is almost ,
Just almost
Like you"

This stanza really speaks to me because this is the reason I write. That if I can write something beautiful, or tragic, or real, that someone, anyone, will feel it too. Someone like me, or you, or the others who have reviewed this.

Words are the way to the soul, don't be afraid to speak like a book.
I tend to and it makes the world that much more of a day dream.

[JMaster1]

I think that is the most beautiful review I ever received , thank you

[Justine Johnston]

No, thank you

[Elmarie]

Wow this poem has a poem between the lines. Love it!

[Laura S-C]

An incredible poem as always with so much emotion

[JMaster1]

I am glad you like it