First connection, Few words

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Sometimes  

It takes just few words to connect  

It takes short messages to feel  

Few words that catch your attention 

Make you smile.  

Suddenly you feel , you breath  

As you know, 

That on the other side of your screen 

Someone feels the same way, 

Experience your words in a special way 

Eager for you to write ,  

More words ,  

Someone special that is almost ,  

Just almost  

Like you 

 

You close your eyes, 

Let your imagination fly  

You share your most beautiful words,  

Bodies touch through the initial connection  

You feel as you are one,  

Bodies and souls 

  

Author's Note

Let me know what you feel

Reviews

[Beautiful Intentions]

Like crying... If you truly wish to know what I feel, how reading this had made me feel, than this is my answer... Like crying. One of the most beautiful poems that I have perhaps ever read, so utterly breathtaking that by the close I was left momentarily speechless. How did you do it? How could you capture the feeling, that sensation of being touched by the words, the exchange between writer and reader so majestically? In one word this is simply 'perfection'... From the prickled flesh in the photograph to every word across the page. As if I had that moment... Entranced, encased by everything you had spoke of, where I had connected to the writer, to you in such a way that it felt as if I could have written the words myself. This brings back so many fond memories of times when author's have moved mountains within me. Brings back irreplaceable feelings of such love and joy. Sigh... This was nostalgic, JMaster1. Love at first read.:) Don't believe this feeling of the bounding shared between two could have been better written.

[JMaster1]

Now you left me with no words , if my words could touch anyone the way it touched you , it mean that I did something good , when you write a poem , the poem become public and it's not yours anymore , it touch certain people in certain ways , others find secrets between the words , but only few , very few can deeply connect to the words , the way you did. This poem reached your heart because you needed those words , you needed someone to describe what you feel

[Beautiful Intentions]

Indeed, dear one.:) This should be added to my favorites, and I will correct that mishap now. I was so emotional yesterday after reading this, that I do believe that I had fled your page to catch my breath. Aha... Such memories it sparked. Such wondrous memories. I was purely taken by this poem... And every ounce of praise was the truth. Thank you for sharing it!

[Farmgirl]

This poem describes Internet connecting in a very powerful way you expressed that moment greatly and defined it well

[louise]

You have captured the essence of totally connecting with another person here perfectly. Very beautiful poem - lovely

[ForgottenByTheWorld]

This poem expresses the feelings that just about every person has ever felt that has used a forum. I have met friends on forums that I have been closer to than my real life friends. I think it is amazing how much words can bond you to another person and how much easier it is to meet someone like you when you have the entire world at the end of your finger tips. You did a wonderful job capturing those feelings and emotions. I hope to read more soon!

[JMaster1]

Thank you so much , you really understand what I wanted to say

[Black Jess]

'' That on the other side of your screen ,Someone feels the same way '' it's exactly true cause i feel the same , I can't put into words how beautiful your poem is . Well done

[JMaster1]

your review is beautiful , it means alot

[12.09am]

demonstrates the true power words can have and the bonds that can come of them. Really enjoyed this as it uses the modernisation of technology and still demonstrates connectivity which some people may beg to differ about the modern day, great work :)

[JMaster1]

Thank you so much :)

[Sweet]

It's very easy to relate to this beautiful poem. I like how in your author's note you ask us what we feel rather than what we think ^_^
Words have a strong power. A simple word can bring joy/pain/fear/anger/life/death...
The words in this poems bring happy thoughts about relationships, from friendship and love. That sweet feeling from hearing something nice from someone we care for.
It draws a smile on my face =)

[JMaster1]

wow I am so happy now

[Cobblestone Traveler]

I love this! I can definitely relate to this poem. The dopamine high you receive when you get a text from the one you adore more than anything else. Excellent job!

[JMaster1]

Thank you very much!

[Tina H.W.]

Just...wow! Just at the right time in my life I read such powerful and emotive words. Your poem is incredible.

[Samantha Jenkins]

I have to completely agree with Kitty blur, although I am not picturing the person I am the person. I have spent many of nights on my phone sending messages and waiting. I have had to goofy smile that comes with a sweet text.

It is not even with love/romance but friendships to, I have made plenty of friends through social media some I stayed friends with and some maybe not but hey, it was something. It is nice when someone feels the same and you can openly talk to them.

[JMaster1]

Thank you :)

[Samantha Jenkins]

Your very welcome.

[kitty blur]

I reread it twice just to feel it again. I've seen in the comments that some can connect this poem to LDRs that they've had, and it's funny because I can connect this emotion with just texting someone that I've got a close bond to. There's all of those inside jokes and tangible tones and like... isn't it incredible how words can mean so much, especially when someone you love shares them with you?

I picture someone laying in their bed with their phone out. Maybe it's midnight or later. And even though you're not physically there, this person is smiling and waiting for each of your replies. Of course, you reply quick, because you're on the other end waiting for the same thing. So cute.

One critique: I think you meant the word 'breathe' instead of 'breath' in line 6. Minor error on an otherwise pretty little piece of work.

[JMaster1]

Thank you , I am glad you could relate to my words
Words can mean so much , I agree