Intellectual Sex

“Intellectual Sex”

 

Watching you sitting on the couch

So close to his Pierced n*****s

You were always attracted to

Intelligent, thought-provoking,

Philosophical men,

Men who could quote Whitman and sip wine

 

Watch you sitting on the couch

As he wet his lip's ring

You miss talking politics and religion

You miss that more than any thought of sex or romance.

With him, it is a fulfillment

Of an intellectual and sexual need.

 

I watch you,

Teasing me in your intellectual way,

I want to make love with you

I don't want your body,

It's too early

Forbidden

 

I want to make love

With your feelings,

With your most intimate

Thoughts and fantasies

Your confusions attract me

The way you use your lack of experience

As your powerful weapon

Make me want you

Make me want to get inside

Your mind

 

Teasing your thoughts

My fingers reach inside

Rubbing your fears

Touching your dirty thoughts

Kissing your memories

Feeling you still want him

So bad

 

Things forbidden always

Become more interesting,

you use a fantasy,

In order to protect yourself

From his temptation,

Your thoughts moan

Purring in a gentle way

I feel your heart whispering

Beckoning

Come to me

Come to make love,

I still want you

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

FIRST IMPRESSIONS

This is a pleasant stimulation of the erotic senses from the alluring title, captivating image, and purple font. Lavender tends to invoke calmness and serenity. It has been known to arouse men yet calm women. The writer displays attention to detail.

CONTENT AND FORMAT

The Whitman reference caught my eye because I adore Walt Whitman's poetry; it is sensual and you can read it as a stand alone by the sections on any page. As the title suggests, "Intellectual Sex" is seductive to females since we tend to romanticize sex. In contrast, men are visual and physical. Therefore, they court their ladies by means of impressing them with literature. Professors are notorious for this behavior. I think we can all agree that we have had sexual fantasies about our teachers.

I imagined the speaker as a female; an intelligent tease of a woman. She strikes me as a sensual being yet classy. The tone of poem comes off as classical but there are moments of blunt sexual details such as "fingers slip inside." The writer the does not hide behind figurative language but rather enhances it, creating a sensory overload.

PERSONAL CONNECTIONS

I adore erotica personally. It gives me a break from other intense reading material since I am diverse. Frankly, I want to read more erotica now instead of some serious work I was reading. I will certainly be keeping an eye on your writing.

Sincerely,
ria

[Tea Lee-Anne]

YES! I love this.

Great job!
*applause*

[JMaster1]

Thank you for your kind words , it mean alot

[Ellen Kolman]

absolutely...you have to make love to a woman's mind before you can touch her body....brilliant poetry

[JMaster1]

Thank you so much , you understood my poem in a special way

[Ellen Kolman]

It is my great pleasure

[Diamond Dunbar]

Dude I love this, this is beautiful and definitely relates to me. I neeed a mental connection to even get turned on.

[JMaster1]

I am glad you love it , your words are special

[Scrap]

Love it!

Clever.

Making love with one's feelings....best line everrrrr

[Clara Kevie]

Great read. I enjoyed the use of imagery.
I especially liked this stanza:
"I want to make love
With your feelings,
With your most intimate
Thoughts and fantasies
Your confusions attract me
The way you use your lack of experience
As your powerful weapon
Make me want you
Make me want to get inside
Your mind"
I love how you used ironic ends to phrases. ^_^

[barleygirl]

WOW! This is very interesting & impactful! I used to have a best friend from afar & all we had to share was "intellectual sex" (he died 18 mos ago). You've described this dance so beautifully. So few men get this . . . that many women long for love to be made to ALL OF THEIR BEING! I love the juxtaposition between tactile language & cerebral turn-on. Great share.

[Elise Anton]

Fascinating. Intellectual sex... The mind is a powerful means of attraction. Well espressed!

[vili]

This is really something , amazing job. :)

[Wiif]

Thank you for sharing ! I really related to- and enjoyed this poem.

[Mary Helda]

and you just gave me an idea for my next poem:-)