Intellectual Sex

“Intellectual Sex”

 

Watching you sitting on the couch

So close to his Pierced n*****s

You were always attracted to

Intelligent, thought-provoking,

Philosophical men,

Men who could quote Whitman and sip wine

 

Watch you sitting on the couch

As he wet his lip's ring

You miss talking politics and religion

You miss that more than any thought of sex or romance.

With him, it is a fulfillment

Of an intellectual and sexual need.

 

I watch you,

Teasing me in your intellectual way,

I want to make love with you

I don't want your body,

It's too early

Forbidden

 

I want to make love

With your feelings,

With your most intimate

Thoughts and fantasies

Your confusions attract me

The way you use your lack of experience

As your powerful weapon

Make me want you

Make me want to get inside

Your mind

 

Teasing your thoughts

My fingers reach inside

Rubbing your fears

Touching your dirty thoughts

Kissing your memories

Feeling you still want him

So bad

 

Things forbidden always

Become more interesting,

you use a fantasy,

In order to protect yourself

From his temptation,

Your thoughts moan

Purring in a gentle way

I feel your heart whispering

Beckoning

Come to me

Come to make love,

I still want you

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

FIRST IMPRESSIONS

This is a pleasant stimulation of the erotic senses from the alluring title, captivating image, and purple font. Lavender tends to invoke calmness and serenity. It has been known to arouse men yet calm women. The writer displays attention to detail.

CONTENT AND FORMAT

The Whitman reference caught my eye because I adore Walt Whitman's poetry; it is sensual and you can read it as a stand alone by the sections on any page. As the title suggests, "Intellectual Sex" is seductive to females since we tend to romanticize sex. In contrast, men are visual and physical. Therefore, they court their ladies by means of impressing them with literature. Professors are notorious for this behavior. I think we can all agree that we have had sexual fantasies about our teachers.

I imagined the speaker as a female; an intelligent tease of a woman. She strikes me as a sensual being yet classy. The tone of poem comes off as classical but there are moments of blunt sexual details such as "fingers slip inside." The writer the does not hide behind figurative language but rather enhances it, creating a sensory overload.

PERSONAL CONNECTIONS

I adore erotica personally. It gives me a break from other intense reading material since I am diverse. Frankly, I want to read more erotica now instead of some serious work I was reading. I will certainly be keeping an eye on your writing.

Sincerely,
ria

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

A very nice poem. I appreciate the diction. Well articulated.

[Nesia]

Very nice poem. it touches some of those subtitles with those we are attracted to. thank you

[Tehillah]

I have read this poem over and over again. It is such a well written relatable poem

[Shy_muse]

I don't think that I have ever read something more true than this poem. You can not simply fall in love with the physical form of a being - there has to be more to love than that. You have to get inside their minds and know them inside out. You need to understand what makes them tick and what brakes them apart. And then, when you've seen their darkest side and you still stay and you can still say "I love you" thats when you know your love is meant to be. A real relationship really does rely on and begin with "Intellectual Sex". Thank you for sharing < 3

[JMaster1]

Only few could relate to this Poem and understand it so well as you did , you must be very special soul

[CrimsonHints]

Interesting poem. I like it. :)

[Elmarie]

I love this poem it has a lovely daring, sweet, kind, respectful yet it's SEXY. LOL Such a refreshing view point.

[JMaster1]

Thank you so much for reading :)

[Ana Del]

This poem explains so much the way I sometimes feel... You want to get so close but not too fast physically close. And then it makes me wonder - something I am currently wondering about - that if you do make love physically before making it intellectually... then the intellectual part closes down somehow? It feels like skipping a step.. I am not sure if what I'm saying it's clear...

But anyhow, I like this poem a lot. You pass on that strange and inexplicable feeling... so amazing and intriguing, teasing... which makes you want more.

[JMaster1]

Yes I can relate to what you mean here , sometimes when physically comes too fast , you lose the intellectual attraction

[Quinn]

Very powerful with lots of strong emotion behind it. Very dynamic in form and structure.

[Anonymous]

I don't really think you need to have that rated as mature. I mean, don't get me wrong, you did stir up some pretty dirty imagery, but not really, not in the typical sense of word dirty. In any event, I really liked it!

[JMaster1]

you understand me so well

[L.E.Osborne]

Wow what a powerful poem! Great read.