Complicated soul's touching

Written with a beautiful young woman that wrote the most romantic words

Complicated soul's touching 

 

Your face shines like a white full moon 

Your hair frame it like a golden ring 

I can easily feel the good vibration of your smile 

Covering my screen like a powder of happiness

 

Words that do not falter

Causing my face to lift

i enjoyed this moment

As time began to shift

 

Beginning with hello

and exchanging hearts

Beauty is in the bearer

A new friendship starts

 

Your complicated soul

With your big shining grin

Touched me deeply tonight

Started like a soft flick of your fingers

Over my lips

Painting a first smile

But later, your romantic soul was so soft

As I had to reach and touched

You let me in, like you were waiting

For our soul dance tonight  

 

Serenity Faith that's our spirits,

Seeing one another, touch is extreme

 

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Hi there, my friend..
First.. I love, love, love, the artwork... The exact art work is so very important.. (I say this perhaps because I am an artist..)
And your words are lovely..
I read all your review.. All extremely nice.. Wish we were in some sort of workshop where constructive criticism... ideas, etc. were accepted.. I find that everyone is so nice here.. but...
I did enjoy this read..
Lisa

[Writergurl]

this is really good, it is intense.
nicely written

[JMaster1]

Thank you very much !

[Writergurl]

not a problem

[Junebug79]

Intense. Loved it. To me this just don't exist anymore does it? I mean last time I felt like this I think I was a teen. I wish to find a love again that is so intense you breath each others souls in and exhale the rest of the world. So it's just you two coming together as one.

[JMaster1]

I am sure you will do soon

[Lina Lotus]

My heart raced faster after each line. I felt as if I was watching the surrender of beautiful hearts! This is beautiful poetry. I enjoyed this so much I read it at leadt 3times. I love poems like this. It gives so much with just the minimal details

[StarCandy]

this is really nice ...i must say AMAZING

[JMaster1]

Thank you so much

[Beth Shade]

I like how though it is sexual it doesn't smother you in it. It lets the beauty of the encounter captivate you and shows how special moments like this can be. That alone is impressive in an age when sex is marketed with the same grace as happy meals at Mc Donalds. Its very beautiful, an easy read with a very nice message, and your wording is very very much on point.

[JMaster1]

your reviews are so beautiful , I love them , thank you so much

[Beth Shade]

Not a problem^^ Im glad to have found your work

[JMaster1]

me too , I enjoy it

[Katt Knipp]

i love that it's sexual without being in your face about it, it makes you picture the moment in a subtle sensual bliss, vary you.

[Farmgirl]

Nailed it !

Truly edgy vibrant full of life and all that excites within it

[Anonymous]

I really like this. I so agree that words can be really powerful even more than physical contact sometimes, nice job!

[Quinn]

Very nice flow to this piece with lots of passion behind it too. Good write.