Bacon

Bacon

A Poem by J.M. Wise
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Politically relevant poem about today's stance towards law enforcement

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Bacon

Prejudice abounds in this nation of ours
It hurts the innocent and leaves nasty scars.
Police they are human, naturally flawed
This still doesn't make them exempt from the law.

 To serve and protect is the oath that they take
Yet look at how easily this oath many break.
Officers work hard, their importance played down
Until they mess up and put a boy in the ground.

Then this nation of ours takes up a cause
They put a spotlight on prejudice, to much applause.
The cops take a hit, their public image decried
But what do we do when an officer dies?

© 2016 J.M. Wise


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Yours is a difficult message to convey, since our nation is so divided on this topic. I think you wrote a balanced message about a difficult situation. The only part I don't agree with is the last line. But this isn't about arguing over stuff, it's about expressing yourself, so this must be how you see it. Anyhow, your poetry has great rhyme & rhythm, the content is original & well-stated with good word choices & a straightforward approach. Even tho I try to read nuanced poetry (which I often don't understand), I prefer a statement that's crystal clear, as this one is.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J.M. Wise

8 Years Ago

Thanks! I try to be straightforward yet original and I am glad you see my writing that way.



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Yours is a difficult message to convey, since our nation is so divided on this topic. I think you wrote a balanced message about a difficult situation. The only part I don't agree with is the last line. But this isn't about arguing over stuff, it's about expressing yourself, so this must be how you see it. Anyhow, your poetry has great rhyme & rhythm, the content is original & well-stated with good word choices & a straightforward approach. Even tho I try to read nuanced poetry (which I often don't understand), I prefer a statement that's crystal clear, as this one is.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J.M. Wise

8 Years Ago

Thanks! I try to be straightforward yet original and I am glad you see my writing that way.
I stand behind our hard working police officers. They put their lives on the line for us every day. Nicely written poem. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J.M. Wise

8 Years Ago

Thanks again Lydia, you always provide a thoughtful response. I stand behind any good person, regard.. read more

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