When I Whisper

When I whisper your name
I think of every moment we've shared.
When I reminisce of our kiss
I feel flutters within me.
When I dream of us
I vision a forever.
When I fantasize you here
You caress my skin.
 When I whisper your name
The world around me disappears.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love. No wasted words. Just strong expressions of a kind and gentle love. I like the ending to this outstanding poem.
"When I whisper your name
The world around me disappears."
Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote

[Ayumu♥]

That was wayy short but uber sweet I really loved this Jordyn. Absolutely beutiful

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This is wonderful, I enjoyed this.

[Layla Night]

wow...amazig. it is creative and beautiful

[Tasha]

i liked this, it was beautiful and creative.