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My Euphoria

My Euphoria

A Poem by Jeremy Baker

My euphoria will be short lived

as I skirmish to maintain impetus

to eclipse the reasons I once possessed

to persist with living.

 

No longer can I galvanise justification

with extravagant claims of innocence or cause.

Pretexts for life may just mimic

Deepak Chopra’s mythical mantras,

but alas, I have no need of eccentric charlatans

whose ‘wisdom’ will meander through dirt-trodden

paths to oppressive falsehood and trickery.

 

Survival is my immediate concern -

not my body but soul; my spiritual demise is imminent.

My euphoria is almost over - just one

final step to oblivion and joyous annulment

of life and living.

 

Those seeking explanations may take a number,

and wait, and wait,

and go on waiting,

until tomorrow comes, if at all.

© 2011 Jeremy Baker


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Life is worth living. Everyone has a purpose and would do to serve it well. Regardless of your spiritual proclivity, our hearts desire connection of some kind. Your writing always provides us with a thought, beckoning us to open our minds and invite you in.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Euphoria is a great way to try to define the alignment of existence with a joy in mind, heart and body - Waiting seems like the pleasurable tension building needed for orgasmic release

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great words, and I feel like this expresses something we all feel at one time or another but may not know how to say

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a specific, intellectual piece, one which makes the reader think; about our purpose here on a planet, which, could have NEVER found itself populated with our species in the first place, but we ARE here. Now, we just have a desire to find why we're here. I love this piece, Jeremy, your word flow, and meaning is a gift to every type of thinking individual...wonderful work!

-Brittany

Posted 13 Years Ago


i love love love ur veribage and the way u use words....I am a fan....

Posted 13 Years Ago


Stunning. You have hit on a point that I've made clear in many of my works: that there is no point to humankind, that the only point to our existence to exist and make up our own meaning as we go. Favorited.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a wonderful write. Most enjoyable read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very good choice of words...Well written...I love the third stanza...Keep writing... :)))

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Jeremy Baker
Jeremy Baker

Busselton, South West, Australia



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I'm a former English & Literature teacher who has always enjoyed the magic, power and simple romance of words well written. My favourite writers include Pablo Neruda, Liam O'Flaherty, Anthony Eaton.. more..

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