Snippet *8

Following on from Snippet *7

Snippet *8

 

Open the doors to see what appears.

Mighty lion succumbed to starvation.

The pit in the hole of my chest opens.

Glorious butterflies singing ho hay!

A gate opens. New, old man emerges.

Who be you? I say. He looks scared, vexed. “Dad.”   

Reviews

[marilyn 1225]

shock value at end is very good.. and it is just a snippet will read more of your work