Snippet *1

A short poem with no name

Snippet *1

Surrounded by blurred noise,

Sinking swiftly into the abyss,

Down I fell. My stomach lurched

thrown against my body’s wall.

Upside down I saw the world.

Before coming crashing down.

Reviews

[Just Plain Me]

I like the description in this :]

[Gregory Hill]

Hmm intresting, it has the making of a good poem, hope u write more.

[Alex Caine]

This is a very expressive "snippet". I suppose you will be writing more? I sure hope so. Nice job!