Gag

Gag

 

Try to breath through your mouth,

As you seem to talk from your arse;

Gagging on your s**t.

 

 

Your words are a slur of

Racial discrimination

And puerile hatred.

 

 

Pushing the minorities down,

Dancing on their graves,

Laying them to waste,

Its your biggest mistake.

 

 

You give them a spade

Tell them to dig;

Well why don’t you?

 

 

Soon those holes you

Make them make

Will be your grave.

 

 

I’ll take my striped pyjamas,

Wear them with my pride,

I will march into the ditch,

To gain the high ground.

 

 

I shall take this spade you give me,

Stick it between you legs

And then we will rule the world.

 

 

All racist b*****d shall see,

What the minorities can do,

As trust me in this;

You soon shall be cleaning the toilets,

eating your own s**t.

 

 

Author's Note

My yell at racial discrimination

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

I'll take my striped pyjamas,

Wear them with my pride,

I will march into the ditch,

To gain the high ground.


A great piece on racial discrimanation John, it is a shame

such things still exist in today's world~ would be nice to gain higher ground

indeed~ superb pen my friend!~Fran

[Livenrite]

Very well written and your message is a great one! Thanks for sharing:)

[Sasha]

The first stanza caught me off-guard. It's good advice, though. I enjoy the overall message behind this and I learned a new word thanks to it. I'd never heard of "puerile" before and it's true enough racism in itself is very childish.

[BluesForTheRisingSun]

What I love about your work, is the fact that you incorporate global issues, such as racial discrimination, into poignant poems that are direct but yet still emotional. That not only voice your personal opinion on the matter, but also explore in an extremely powerful and descriptive manner, why you feel so strongly.
What I mean to say, is that this piece was a truly memorable, powerful, emotional piece.
So, awesome job :)

[Lydia]

Really blunt, and really good. I like how you aren't afraid to tell it as you see it. Good write.

[Parody]

I love the bluntness and the pride in this poem.
Truly wonderful.

[lindsay]

wow. I can feel your angst in this poem, and i must agree with you.
A job well done.
Very well written

[deeps]

Wow! Awesome I like this full of straight up and full of emotion.
Well written