Gracious gift

Gracious gift

A Poem by Kim
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A poem about how life is an amazing gift

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Nothing but a blessing
Nothing but a star
Clear as the sun in the sky
Hidden like every breath we take
A gift to us has been given
But it's up to you to see
The life you've been given, the life you can live,
is a gracious gift indeed

© 2014 Kim


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I love the simple elegance of this poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Kim

10 Years Ago

Thank you ^^
I wish more could take this view of life... I am guilty of denying it myself at times. this write has a nice simple elegance to it for what is such a complex subject... Thank you for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Kim

10 Years Ago

I think its easy to just... forget it sometimes. Glad you liked it :)
Runs wonderfully, nice imagery. My only criticism is the odd grammatical error, but that means nothing. Nice work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Kim

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
This is beautiful- life certainly is a gift :)
I love the metaphors to do with the sky/stars
My favourite line would have to be "Hidden like every breath that we take"
Well done :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Kim

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Chloe_Spence

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)

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Added on April 19, 2014
Last Updated on December 14, 2014
Tags: Life, gift, star, sun, blessing, hidden, give, you, gracious

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Kim

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