i like this poem Its simplistic, yes reveals the human male nature of discovery of ones self during the time when those feeling awaken toward a girl. Also it could be taken in another manner how people are attracted by the bizarre and cant become desensitized by the "Freakish" All in all this is a reflective piece and definitely one to ponder.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
You have written an impressive review, Jordan. I enjoyed reading it very much. Thank you so much f.. read moreYou have written an impressive review, Jordan. I enjoyed reading it very much. Thank you so much for your very kind words.
i like this poem Its simplistic, yes reveals the human male nature of discovery of ones self during the time when those feeling awaken toward a girl. Also it could be taken in another manner how people are attracted by the bizarre and cant become desensitized by the "Freakish" All in all this is a reflective piece and definitely one to ponder.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
You have written an impressive review, Jordan. I enjoyed reading it very much. Thank you so much f.. read moreYou have written an impressive review, Jordan. I enjoyed reading it very much. Thank you so much for your very kind words.
Ha-Ha! This was great, Joyce. I suppose one might be worried if those boys weren't interested in the dancing girls, huh? And as the old saying goes, "Boys will be boys." Well done!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thanks, Rebecca. Yes, they sure will be! I appreciate your thoughts a lot.
How true, Scott. I remember seeing the signs advertising the girly shows at circuses when I was a k.. read moreHow true, Scott. I remember seeing the signs advertising the girly shows at circuses when I was a kid and was inspired to write this tanka. I appreciate your review very much.
10 Years Ago
Hah...men will be men...we are knuckleheads on some occasions...LOL
My pleasure.
Scott
For boys dancing girls will always trump sword swallowing lol.Very nice
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
You're right about that, Vida. Thanks for stopping by to read and let me know your thoughts. I am .. read moreYou're right about that, Vida. Thanks for stopping by to read and let me know your thoughts. I am impressed by your poetry.
11 Years Ago
You are welcome dear poet and i will be visiting more of your work I think you are awesome.Thank yo.. read moreYou are welcome dear poet and i will be visiting more of your work I think you are awesome.Thank you so much for liking my work:)
I understand how the NYCsubway can make freaks boring. Sword swollowers can all choke. Dancing girls...boyz of all ages get giddy. Truth needs few words and you do it very well Joyce. :-) Tom
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks for leaving your thoughts behind, Tom. You have experienced life as few others have both on .. read moreThanks for leaving your thoughts behind, Tom. You have experienced life as few others have both on the streets of NYC and on the battlefield, so your experiences give you a broad perspective to draw upon in your readings. I'm always pleased to hear what you have to sayl
I understand this poem. Those dancing girls were a more tempting option. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks, Coyote. I appreciate your thoughts very much. I will be reading poetry this weekend since .. read moreThanks, Coyote. I appreciate your thoughts very much. I will be reading poetry this weekend since I have to get up for work before dawn tomorrow. I'm looking forward to reading more of yours.
Thank you, K. I write tanka a lot - it's my form of choice. I appreciate your appreciation of the .. read moreThank you, K. I write tanka a lot - it's my form of choice. I appreciate your appreciation of the form very much.