A Homely Flower?

A Homely Flower?

A Poem by Joyce S. Greene
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Is there a homely flower?

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A homely flower?

 

Bees don't differentiate

when they pollinate 

while many men will only chase

 ladies who are fair of face

© 2013 Joyce S. Greene


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Joyce S. Greene
Graphic credit: Google Images

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Boy, isn't that the truth! Funny how women aren't as particular about looks. We want a man that can reach our soul, stir us from within... Not usually caring about what he looks like on the outside (although if attractive that is a bonus I suppose)
While they are conditioned to look at the wrappings before they decide to find the woman within...
Excellent penning!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joyce S. Greene

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your charming and very nice review. Your thoughts are much appreciated.



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Cute and cleverly word I enjoyed this. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joyce S. Greene

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Mark. I'm so glad you took the time to let me know your thoughts. Means a lot to me.
Clever and fun to read with a great illustration. Please excuse me for pointing out that many women are equally biased in favor of men who are "fair of face."

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joyce S. Greene

11 Years Ago

Thank you, richom, I appreciate your very kind review. I value your ideas very much - you are one h.. read more
Cute and clever Joyce. I like this one alot!

:) Julie

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joyce S. Greene

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Julie. I like having fun when I write and then to hear responses like yours makes me ve.. read more
Because they don't understand that the beauty is the entire flower, not just the outward appearance. Nicely done Joyce.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joyce S. Greene

11 Years Ago

You're absolutely right, Jack. Beauty shines in the eyes, and quite a few men are too busy looking.. read more
Such truth you expose in this piece. This is wonderful Joyce.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joyce S. Greene

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your very nice comment, Anne. I appreciate your reading my work and taking the time to.. read more
icelandicblue

11 Years Ago

It is always my pleasure Joyce.
6's wild, flowers too! that's what busy bees will do. Alas I fear you correct bout my fellow men. In the charming way you wrote it down, I don't feel so bad. :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joyce S. Greene

11 Years Ago

Just trying to have a little fun, Tom. Thanks for your nice thoughts, they are much appreciated.
Boy, isn't that the truth! Funny how women aren't as particular about looks. We want a man that can reach our soul, stir us from within... Not usually caring about what he looks like on the outside (although if attractive that is a bonus I suppose)
While they are conditioned to look at the wrappings before they decide to find the woman within...
Excellent penning!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joyce S. Greene

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your charming and very nice review. Your thoughts are much appreciated.
If you ask me, the bees are the smart ones! Very clever words here, Joyce. Great rhyming. I enjoyed it. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joyce S. Greene

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Lydi. I appreciate your thoughts very much.
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder ?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

11 Years Ago

Clever indeed Joyce !
Joyce S. Greene

11 Years Ago

Good morning, Tom. Thanks again. I will be reading poetry today - this last week was so busy I har.. read more
Tom

11 Years Ago

Know the feeling Joyce and enjoy your Sunday too !
So clever and so witty. I laughed loud.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joyce S. Greene

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Pryde. Your thoughts mean a lot to me.

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Added on October 20, 2013
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Tags: #poetry, #humor, #bees, #men & ladies, #pollination

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