under my son's bed A Senryu

you never know what you might find under your son's bed . . .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Publication credit: Prune Juice 2010

Reviews

[PatrickTumblety]

This makes me afraid to have children :) I'd rather find a monster under there! Great job!

[Brianna Brie]

This is so funny. I was thinking of a monster under the bed. One of a different sort, I suppose.

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thanks, Brianna. I really appreciate your comment. It means a lot to me.

[icelandicblue]

Hah, the typical coming of age and no mother is ever really ready to face it. Well done!

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thanks for dropping by to leave your very kind thoughts I appreciate your encouraging words very much.

[Muse]

Oh my...I JUST LOGGED OUT AND SAW THIS. So I had to log back in to leave a review. Freakin hilarious! 100/100

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thank you so much, Muse. You're very gracious and I appreciate your words more than you can know.

[MsJewel]

I don't have a son, but now I'm almost afraid to look under my daughter's bed....

Your poem is cute and clever Joyce. Love it

Hugs, Julie

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thanks, Julie. I appreciate your very kind words. Hope your daughter grows up to be a fine poetess like her mother - I'm sure your help will be invaluable to her.

[MsJewel]

Actually Joyce - she is a newspaper reporter. She just graduated from college and works for the Los Angeles Times. She doesn't get poetry at all and continuously attempts to correct the grammar in my poems and structure the sentences. LOL.. (she must get that from her dad) Hugs, Julie

[Joyce S. Greene]

That's too bad, Julie, but at least she inherited your love for the written word. Hope your day is a good one.

[Anand Sehgal]

eternal Momma viewpoint. Thank god you didn't bring school bag :P :P

[Joyce S. Greene]

You've got me thinking, even about your comment, Anand. Thanks for leaving your thoughts behind, your mind must be working hard all the time!

[Jack...]

Funny Joyce. The things you can find under the kids bed if you are brave enough to look. :)

[Joyce S. Greene]

Hi Jack. Thanks for leaving your thoughts behind. My son was a good kid so I didn't have to worry too much. Guess a centerfold was about the worst thing I ever found. Lucky, I guess.

[Clara]

Brilliant. It made me chuckle. :)

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thank you for letting me know your thoughts, Lola. It means a lot to me.

[Baby Ricochet]

Sounds like a normal boy to me

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thanks, BR, I appreciate your stopping by to leave your thoughts.