I Love My Life...

Let my words
be few
but let them
be meaningful

Never will
I hate this life
that I lived
and wish I could
change anything
because here I am
happy where I'm going

I used to think
how this life was like
selfish and all about me
but will never be

Somethings
are meant to be
the way they are

I love my style
I love my family
I love my friends
and I love my God

He breathed into me life
I can never repay him
but I can try my best

I love my life
and who I am
and who I'm going to be...

Author's Note

Reviews are welcome
Pic not by me

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and powerful poem. I like the positive feel to the statements. We need to enjoy our life. Life is good for the people who can overcome all things and hold tight to the good things in their life. I like the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[J. F. Charleston]

I agree. I have a friend that pretty much sees the positive in a situation and she pretty much enjoys her life. I'm glad that you did and you're welcome.

[A. H. Pinley]

Once we admit that we're not the center of the universe, but the one that knew me while I was still in the whom of my mother is, we're able to start loving and engaging life. Good write my friend.

[Rhianne Ney]

God really finds His way on our lives properly and helpful (:

[Honey]

I really liked this poem because it is refreshing to read something so hopeful. I think often writers forget that joy and happiness is a strong emotion that is also worth expressing!

The first few lines were a perfect set up for the reader to read with curiosity and an open mind. I liked you referencing how you used to not think this way, and how this view of life has made you happier. I really get the sense that you are feeling connected to God and the happiness it is bringing you.

The one tiny thing I would change are the ellipses at the end. I would leave it as just a period, or no punctuation at all.

I really enjoyed reading, thanks for sharing! :)

[J. F. Charleston]

Thanks for the review! No problem about sharing. I'll think about that.