Love Me Tonight, Kill Me Tomorrow...

I know

you don't want to

be here anymore

but just one last thing

before you go

please love me tonight

and kill me tomorrow

 

You don't have to

pull out the candles

or the wine

lets just cuddle

on the couch

 

Lets go out

and dance

one last time

as if it was our first

 

Let me take you

to a movie

that you want to see

and we can take a long walk

underneath the stars

 

If you want to leave
me, broken and lonely
I'll let you go
without a fuss
if we love tonight
I promise, just us

Love me tonight
 but kill me tomorrow
I beg you please...

Author's Note

Reviewing is open and greatly liked

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

Have you per chance taken a looksy into my dark corner as of late?? I'd swear I saw a shadow of a Texan hat brim just above me on the wall.. ;) Goodness you changed writing feelings lately. I like each feeling you share...I'm just...wow..change direction quickly. Again it feels like an experience lived through..love gone horribly wrong. You alright??? Good to share all feelings though...lived or just imagined :)

[J. F. Charleston]

I think you've guessed right, but I don't think I'm far in the corner. Well different ideas and inspirations will do that to you; not to mention deep lost feelings that resurface from time to time. All my life I've had pretty much a broken heart, and after so many years of trial and fail, the feeling escapes. And yes I'm ok, just got a little darker ideas for things. No suicide attempts or major depression. Yes, I agree that all such feeling lived or thought of is good to be shared. Most of my stuff is made up, but they all have my person feeling like I lived it.

[Shy Girl]

There is a poet here on the WC that tends to have me peek out my dark corner as I call it. High school is a place I wish I could forget...so I hear you on the broken parts of one's heart. But I wasn't saying you we're suicidal...just making sure you were alright with the change of direction in thought...meanings..and tempo of your pieces. I ask that if all my friends here when something changes so quickly. So I asked you :) Well done expression of emotion felt. Could feel it throughout the piece. Thank you for the continued RRs looking forward to more :)

[J. F. Charleston]

Thanks, I just wanted to make sure in case you were wondering. I'm glad that there's at least one of us that make you peak out. I've got more than a broken heart and steady tempos. They just come randomly. Thanks I hope to send some good ones your way.

[Poetic Beauty]

I think we all have come to a crossroads in our lives and have felt like this. We know that the end is coming but we can't bare to deal with it. Once last dance before the band stops playing.

[A. H. Pinley]

Make a great country song.

[Rhianne Ney]

Love me tonight
but kill me tomorrow
I beg you please...

These are the keypoints of this great poem I was wondering why you were able to create one but anyways great job!

[J. F. Charleston]

Well everything has got to have some sort of point; hidden or told. Now I'm wondering why you ask. Just darker ideas have formed. I'm not going to change my entire writing style, if that's what you were wondering about. Thanks for the review.

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome, I don't want you to change your style either since it was what makes you a writer