Loving Fool

Every time
that I'm with you
I'm just a fool
who's loving you

All of me
is for you to love
all that you are
will take me far
I just want
to be with you forever

Your eyes
are paintings
painted by God
they have the power
to release and capture

Silk for hair
velvet for skin
berries for lips
pearls for a soul
a wild mustang for a spirit

Oh God help me

I'm gonna think of you
dream of you
wanna take your hand
and kiss you until we're forever banned

I'm just a fool
who's in love with you.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Shy Girl]

For some reason, I can't quite place, sometimes I can hear longing within your writings. Not the type of longing that a person has for going he after a long day to the person waiting for them...but longing of a soul lost somehow. Longing so entense you can feel your own heart breaking as you read. They just seem lost to each other in some way sometimes...maybe it's how I read them.. As always a very nice piece :)

[J. F. Charleston]

In a lot of them there is. And thanks for the reviews. You are the greatest and keep me doing what I love.

[N!LoC]

i like your poems ... they are right up my alley... i always relate so much to the lovey dovey stuff :-)

[Alyssa Carlstrom]

This made me smile! You had me at "... all that you are, will take me that far". I think this one is better than National Driver, but that's just my opinion. Thanks for sharing!

[J. F. Charleston]

This one was written before National Driver. It was savedon my ipod then published it after. Thanks for the reviews and hope you've got a few new pieces

[Sami Khalil]

Your eyes
are paintings
painted by God
they have the power
to release and capture...
My faves in this nice poem...

[Coyote Poetry]

Love can leave us looking foolish. Good to be a fool in the desire of love. The rewards are worth the chance. No weakness in the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[J. F. Charleston]

Thanks for the reviews, Coyote. I really enjoy your reviews and pieces. Always glad that we befriended each other.