A Lost Friendship

A Lost Friend$hip

I remember the times,
You turned up to me,
Full of trust you had in me.


I remember the days,
We spent together,
The special moments,
We shared with each other.


I remember the moments,
You reassured me,
Of an everlasting friendship,
 A lovely relationship.


Our friendship stands,
Among all the promises,
We couldn't keep.

 
I am waiting for you,
But, I don't know,
When you'll turn back,
When you'll come back?



-J'Eliot

Reviews

[Infinity Blues]

I can relate to this well actually. Over the last few weeks my very best friend and I are....Well, we don't speak anymore.
I liked the font and the layout, the flow and style were done splendidly. Great write.
-Infinity

[annabellee]

I can totally relate, I've also lost a very dear friend, indeed she was my best friend at the time, so I know how that feels...
I really enjoy your poems, keep up the good work :)

[ron]

That feeling can stay with you for years. S when I read it I felt that pain come back.

[Leigh]

Like the jumbled up and big font you've used and more importantly the style of the strong and simple message, I enjoyed this

[J'Eliot]

Awww....

[Criss ;)]

This's called true love, it shows frm ths blw one stnza

I am waiting for you,
But, I don't know,
When you'll turn back,
When you'll come back?...lvly phrse, i lvd it, ncly penned.

[J'Eliot]

I am glad to hear this. :D

[ron]

I loved it. It did make me want to cry because they is waiting for there friend that has gone away.

[J'Eliot]

I know how it feels.

[Akshat♥]

Full of emotions :)
I loved it!!
Friendship is hard to built and impossible to forget...
Keep writing!!

Your Friend
Akshat

[J'Eliot]

Thank You for the review! :)

[Akshat♥]

You are welcome dear :)

[Luca]

This is a great poem, really. I think it could be put to music really easily, but it's great on its own. You can really feel the rhythm just by the words themselves so I think you should make more poems like this one.

[J'Eliot]

Thank you so much. Reviews like this boost up my confidence. But I had written this poem when I was a sophomore.