Hauki, Senryu, and Me

Hauki, Senryu, and Me

A Poem by JE Falcon
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A mix of something for fun.

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Bubbles are life's dreams

Some move in the slightest breeze

Then --- (POP!) --- they are gone *** JE Falcon





In wonder he looks

His image is in the glass

Ape touches mirror *** JE Falcon





Bee is waterlogged

Near drowning in the birdbath

I play God today. *** JE Falcon


© 2022 JE Falcon


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Perfect imagery in all three, but the first one is my favorite! Well penned!

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Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JE Falcon

2 Years Ago

Mine Too, thanks for the reply.
KATHY SUE SILLS

2 Years Ago

You are welcome!
Wow I loved all of these especially the last two

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JE Falcon

2 Years Ago

Gee, thanks, Julie, happy you enjoyed my thoughts.
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

2 Years Ago

I did especially the last two
Very good
well done. i enjoyed reading! hope to see more from you.

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JE Falcon

2 Years Ago

Thanks, and there will be more if I don't Croke first, LOL.
cheyenne s garcia

2 Years Ago

alright. sounds good!
Wonderful images, great writing

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JE Falcon

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Soren, trying to stay on the lighter side.
Playing God now! Man!! Bee's, bubbles and apes. It's fun to be surprised in poetry just like music.

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JE Falcon

2 Years Ago

Thanks, Bill, we try. :)
Haiku's are like digital billboards of the mind.
So effective 👌

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JE Falcon

2 Years Ago

Thanks Cherrie. I hope that you have a great day.
I loved these, love that first one a lot, so nicely written

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JE Falcon

2 Years Ago

Thanks, much, and thanks for the reply.
I wonder what she told her hivemates...
Nicely done.

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JE Falcon

2 Years Ago

LOL, I wondered if the Bee even knew.

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Added on February 15, 2022
Last Updated on March 9, 2022
Tags: bubbles, mirror, Bee

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I began writing poems and narrative poems as a hobby about 1970. I like writing in rhyme but have others. I published some poems and won some awards in the 1980's, mostly in quarterlies across the U.. more..

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