Haiku - Wildlife

Haiku involving wildlife.

hillsides gather dew

birds bathe in water droplets

preen in the sunlight *** JE Falcon

young bull tests his legs

doing a buckaroo dance

runs off to nowhere *** JE Falcon

atop the tall tree

the hawk sits and watches life

swaying in a breeze *** JE Falcon

baby elephant

rolls around in the mud-pond

a new thing to learn *** JE Falcon

Reviews

[KAREN]

I love short poems that tell a story, and yours does!

[JE Falcon]

Thanks, we try to please.

[KAREN]

You're welcome

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

All of your Haiku are written with vivid imagery! Well done!

[JE Falcon]

I thank you for your thoughts, they are always helpful.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

My pleasure!

[M. J. Smith]

Like snapshots in a scrapbook. I love it. Beautifully done, Sir.

[JE Falcon]

Thanks for taking a look, and the comment was spot on.

[William Michael Reeves]

Young Pachyderm discovers
A place in Earth not alone

[JE Falcon]

Elephants are interesting creatures.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I am especially fond of the first two.
a lot of us humans run to nowhere.

[JE Falcon]

Yes, it's like getting to that place where you don't know anyone, but didn't try.

[Betty Hermelee]

I love your Haiku's, very imaginative and well written. I think I like the elephant one the best, because I have seen baby elephant roll in the mud ponds in Africa and India.. a beauty, and a learning experience with mama watching.
Best, B

[JE Falcon]

Much appreciate the review. And we like that you liked them.

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re welcome!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear JE… your Haiku’s are adorable … I ❤️ love Baby Elephants… they are little “Forgetmenots”… Each Haiku is amazing. truly, Pat

[JE Falcon]

Thanks, Pat, they are all about the picture we gather in our memories.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Moments that demand to penned are always the best and most visual.
From the glistening dew to the twisting buck/kick of a yearling . I loved it.

[JE Falcon]

Thanks for the review and kind feedback, they are always appreciated.

[Coyote Poetry]

Each poem is a gem my friend. You allowed the reader to visit perfect and wonderful places. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[JE Falcon]

Thanks. --- Just some snapshots that were stuck in my brain. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.