And Then Came The Rain

I was inspired to write this poem a couple of days ago when a rainstorm appeared out of nowhere

I watched a bird soar on relaxed wisps of wind
And then came the rain
I watched a leaf fall from a tree
Floating on relaxed wisps of wind
And then came the rain
I saw a butterfly floating on the breeze
And heard the sweet song of a sparrow
And then came the rain
And the bird, the leaf, the butterfly, and the sparrow
All rejoiced

Reviews

[ravenhawk]

Very beautiful. Images seem to carry me to a relaxing, calm place. Loved the visual thoughts, could almost feel the wind and rain.

[Jeffrey David]

Thanks.....What a nice review...very nice to hear that my writing had such a nice effect...

[MzC]

I love the message and the repetition in this one...also "wisps of wind"...I'm a sucker for alliteration...nicely done!