Just You... Just Me:)

Just You... Just Me:)

A Poem by Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam
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You & I

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Let's chase these stars
One by one
Around the galaxies
Let's live our dreams
One by one
In an enchanted castle
One by one
Holding hands
Heavy hearts
Heavenly clouds
All we need is you and me
Just you and me
I need you by my side!
Let's get back the time
One more time
Going backwards
Let's start the play
With nothing left to prove
Like the sparkling star
One by one
Holding hands
No more tears
No more fears
All we need is you and me
Just you and me
I need you by my side!
Let's break free
One by one
From all our chains
Let's open our eyes
One by one
See more than what we can see
Forever kind
Forever blind
All we need is you and me
Just you and me
I need you by my side!
Even after years
We'll always be so close to tears
Just you and me!

© 2015 Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam


Author's Note

Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam
Thank you for your valuable comments.
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although on emotional level I can not relate this, however on a poetic level that is something different. there is innocence here that you have found and I myself have yet, So in an emotional way I am green with envy.

love these lines....

Let's break free
One by one
From all our chains

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Forever kind
Forever blind

Love is not only blind but is for the luck and brave....It seems that you have all of your bases covered.....well done

Posted 9 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam

9 Years Ago

fortes fortuna adiuvat:) Thank you Rico:)



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I actually love this poem, there are people in life that come and go, and then there are people who you can't do without, the absence creates a hole in your life that can't be filled by anyone else, whatever that role was be it mother, father, sister, brother, friend, lover, there are some bonds that can't be forced or broken.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam

9 Years Ago

There are bonds that can't be forced or broken... We'll said...couldn't have said it better myself.... read more
This was a beautiful piece, It swells with passion and emotion. Good job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam

9 Years Ago

Thanks Alice:)
I like that. That is really good

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam

9 Years Ago

Thanks Jenny:)
Jenny Kort

9 Years Ago

Your Welcome
This is really nice. Not too sure on what it's about though.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam

9 Years Ago

Thanks Charleen:) It's a song... Like a duet between the two main characters of a Disney movie:)

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Added on January 19, 2015
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Tags: love, you, me, us, life, enchanted, time, heart

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Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam
Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam

Pasir Ris, Singapore



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